The second book in the Cyburst Origions trilogy
When sharing more memories with Rarity, Cyber burst finds that some of his memories have been tampered with. the memory in question is one that he remembers quite fondly because of something it does to his cutie mark. when Rarity tells Cyburst what she saw, Cyburst goe's to a Friend that helped him after the strange occurence.
Rated T for some crude humor and adult themes.
This is the second story in a series in which the timeline of BlackMirage's main intertwines with this one.
FIRST BITCHES
Sorry for my language
MORE NEED MORE NOW
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I didn't think it would be approved so fast.
I'll post the chapters as I make them.
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Well you better get to writing then...
haha... haha... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Haven't started to read but I will at some point in exchange for actually commenting on it. Now I have a question. Is it accedent or accident?
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you want to see psycopathic?
I'LL SHOW YOU PSYCOPATHIC
GYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *cough*
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let me change that
Well okay then. There goes me being a grammar freak on a story i haven't even read yet. In return, I will not only definitely read your story but; whenever mine goes up, you can feel free to read it and point out every grammar mistake in mine. Also feel free to hate it even if you don't. I need to stop my spells of correcting every mistake I see others make. Now I really sound like a blunt rude person. Even I hate me.
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I too am a grammer freak, but I usualy let science do the work for me
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Well you took my ramble better than I did. I thank thee. now off to the lunacy that is sleep!
Which stories entwine with this one? I don''t want to read a story and give an opinion if I am going to be missing anything? Not that it matters since I have never seen a story I have disliked.
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A Lightining Storm and The War for Equestria
uh oh i saw the beginning. is that bad? also now that i have read it and get the references this is beyond amazing. I fear what will happen to my own stories if i start trying to copy your changes between past, present and future tense within the same sentences. All kidding aside this was actually better than I expected. And I expected nothing. I do not even know what i am writing. Maybe i am rambling again. Why do I always ramble!
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lol wut?
YUS!!!! UPDATE!!!!
Wait a sec....
After talking to a rather white pony with nice sunglasses, he gave up.
Vinyl?!
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Yay! someone pays attention to detail.
Oh Cyburst you sneaky little pony
If anyone can truthfully say that they get the Silverbolt reference the first time, they are automatcally promoted to awesome and get a prize
moar...
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*slaps Blackmirage across the face*
WAIT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE! I'm doing the best I can
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I'm SoRrY dO yOu WaNt Me To KiSs It?
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No thank you...
*slowly backs up then runs away*
moar?
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What did I just say
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NEW CHAPTAR!!!
Pyramids of Gaia...
Seems vaguely familiar...
Wait...
Pyramids of Gaia
Intertwines with BlackMirage's Storyline?
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MWAHAHAHYEEHEHEHEHAHAHOOHAHHAHAHAHA I'm the phycotic one here glares at all of you and is backed up by his 5 ninjas hehehehehe now I need to murder something brb also this chapter you should know the ratings cuz I did the first of these is an for nice job on the details for his sarcasm
wait did he talk to VInyl? anyway are gonna see Zecora be a badass huh is she gonna be a badass you know like REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY bad.... gets lips zipped by Cyburst *grumblegrumble* at my stupidity anyway this chapter gets a due to anticipation of badassery *Cyburst looks threateningly DO that again
yeah I think we all got the Silverbolt reference and also Why, if he was in jail, he would be the pick of theā¦ SWEET CELESTIA NEVER THINK LIKE THAT AGAIN!! AHAHHAHAHAA as well as thsi chapter went futher in my opinion of the mane character and helped me learn he wasn't one to get pointlessly angry and HA yes Zecora was BADA..... Cyburst is right behind me isn't he gets knocked out my words as I'm slipping into unconsiousness are this chapter gets a due to BADASS thwack is out cold
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wow, you're fast!
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and then you run into me and I take you to the The Rainbow factory and tell you about my job to creat all new kinds of torture and isn't it just wonderful heres your rating great and powerfull author
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well, I don't know about powerful.
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i.qkme.me/35l9sh.jpg also heres your oops i mean maybe
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I get paid for reading things I'm told too I got pretty fast and thank you and you are powerful in the world of liturature for making a story that a pony can respect for the story and your humbleness
by the way I'm reading the start of your next story you better work on that