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The Mirage


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First! nd awesome fic can't wait to see where you take it

where did you get this idie i have to know because i think i heard somthing like this before

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I had a nightmare :pinkiecrazy:

awsome can't wait for the next chapter:rainbowkiss:

geez that was good... Night Flash seemed weak in the past lol but yay for protectiveness of a friend :yay: hmm.... i kinda picture Clock Star, and night flash together trying to make Mirage jealous or such idk, just a suggestion. all in all great story my friend, cant fathom to see the next segment. :pinkiesmile:

Hey everypony! I wanted to tell you that im going to be going back to school soon and will try to get this story done before I go back, as for the others I'll probably release two for this then one for each. (I'm talking about A Lightning Storm: Rebooted and Equestria Life)


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:ajbemused:

you'll be hearing from me soon

"All of the ponies began to throw nearby things at the barrier, pots, vases, rocks, dirt, a cat, anything they could get their hooves on."

pots, vases, rocks, dirt, a cat,

a cat

O RLLY?

I know something that nobody else does. But I'm not going to share it
Gyahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Rain Whisper is O.P., also...DAT FIGHT SCENE

THAT FIC WAS AMAZING, I HAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING SO AWESOME IN MY LIFE, keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Ruling the throne by side my aunt. Read my new book btw "Life of Night Flash" just put it out. Did it all on the window phone

Great start to what I am sure is going to be another epic story.

Epic! I knew that you would not just leave Mirage dead. To be honest, this is the first series of stories that I have read that had an OC as a main character. I had avoided those kinds of stories because I did not want to have to take the time to try and get to know some random character that I would never end up seeing again. You have taught me the error of my ways. I look forward to finishing this story and then reading your "A lightning storm: Reboot".

Yet another bad-ass chapter. I love the twists that you put into this. Keep up the great writing!

Boy, that escalated quickly. I hope they did not destroy the entire city with that blast.

Damn...just...damn. That was a pretty bad-ass chapter. The fight scenes, the sadness, and the death. All very well done.

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So many Thank You's :twilightsmile::raritystarry::yay::moustache::trollestia::pinkiehappy:

Now that was yet another amazing story by you. If there is ever anything that I would change in these three stories, it would be the detail. I would have made it a tad bit more detailed throughout. Also, I wouldn't have killed Spitfire (because she is tied for my favorite) but that is just because I am a bit of a bitch when it comes to her. These were really great stories. I am glad that I read them. I hope that more people come along and read these, you deserve the views. I look forward to reading more from you and possibly doing some writing with you. Keep up the great writing!

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You are very welcome. You deserve it.

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Also, I think that another sequel is an order for this. :pinkiehappy:

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Will be one in the future

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Now that is great news to hear.

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