After Twilight had become a princess, she stayed in Canterlot, eventually bringing her friends along, the only pony who hadn't come was Fluttershy, who stayed to look after her animals.
There's a lot of run-on sentences. The clop chapter especially contains a lot of IKEA Erotica, but there's a lot of dull description in general.
Also, if any part of the story contains M-rated content, then the entire story needs to be rated M rather than T. Mis-rating stories is a reportable offense.
There's a lot of run-on sentences. The clop chapter especially contains a lot of IKEA Erotica, but there's a lot of dull description in general.
Also, if any part of the story contains M-rated content, then the entire story needs to be rated M rather than T. Mis-rating stories is a reportable offense.