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Corrupt Gnashty
Only on a Sunday. Mark my words, only on a Sunday.
Corrupt Gnashty
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Lol, nineteen person orgy! Laughed till it hurt when I read that. One of the first stories I read but pretty good!
Good beginning, look forward to more.
Liking the intro. I'm definitely going to keep an eye on this one.
Before i read this, i little bit of advice. You... NEVER... EVER... say "what could possibly go wrong." Murpy's Law states "whatever CAN go wrong WILL go wrong" the more you know
Unique idea! Not something you see on this site. Keep it up!
2168564 That was the point.....It was supposed to give you a heads up to basically tell that something will go wrong. The basic needs of a story (usually) consist of a problem and a protagonist with a solution. Were you addressing me (the author) or Andrew Carmichael (the character)? If your statement was direct at me then, lol ya I did that on purpose. If it was to Andrew then...well...ya.
Why does it jump into second person at the end?
2180144 Oh... opps. Thanks for pointing that out.
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Well let's just see where this goes.
"My little friend from down under reinforced his efforts and tried to become as hard as a brick wall."
This story is pretty funny, I find myself laughing almost all the time. Keep up the comedy man!
It's sad that I'll have to wait so long for the next chapter, this is really good. Keep up the good work.
Bueno.
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I only have time on the weekends so I promise I'll try my best to write one chapter each weekend.
Ya, sorry about the long waiting periods
2201720
? Do tell 
....if you wouldn't mind 
I know I shouldn't ask how....but....you can relate to this
Keep it up bro
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well long story short i made a bet with this guy i had a crush on and i lost so i had to be his slave for 5 hours 
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... ha well it couldn't have been that bad, I mean you had a crush on him right? And what better reason to hang around him for five hours, huh? 
Oh
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Thanks :D Will do.
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!Muchas gracias, senior!
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its was a while ago but i can't remember if i lost of purpose 
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Oh, lol
Looking good so far, liking the whole waiting room interaction going on before the actual interview too
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lol to you to 
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Thanks, Andrew should actually be getting an interview by chapter 3
Really liking the interaction the character and Chloe, starting to get good now can't wait for future chapters
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mayhaps there be some future competition between the daring Pegasus and this young maiden
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That picture made my day
As for your theory...well, you'll see.
Holy hay only this morning this thing appeared and its already got over 50 likes! Your doing something right here!
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I aim to please!
Good job good sir.
I can't wait to see the next chapter.
2252884 Oh really now? Falling in line with your characters there, are we?
I liked it. Great work so far.
Like!
Don't understand why the dislikes?
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I don't understand either but meh, what am I gonna do about it? I'm just grateful to the people that do like my story so far, such as yourself. Thanks!
nice
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2312439 true that
next chapter?
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Soon, probably this weekend.
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I cant wait :D
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LOLZ!!!
Loved this chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
Next chapter?
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This weekend, if my study schedule permits it.
2480442 Awesome! Can't wait!
2263491 Because there are people who don't like the story. I'd say it's probably something about the writing style or that it's made little progress in 3 chapters that it could have made in one or maybe two.
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As for your comment on the writing style: Ya, I can see that it needs a bit more description but as for the progress: Have you ever considered that that is the reason that some people like it? Unlike most clop-fics, its actually focusing on the story. To me it just seems like the writer isn't just trying to make some half-assed attempt at writing a story, he/she is actually focusing on the plot. The slow and careful pace of the story makes it seem realistic and that's a what some people seem to want, especially considering the average clop-fic and besides the longer the story the better,right? Then again everyone is entitled to their opinion.
P.S: T.X.B, WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE?!?!
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I can see that my writing style may be viewed upon by some people as unfavorable but as for my story's progression speed, it is exactly how I want it to be. Slow and life-like(or at least that is how I want it to come off as) . If this displeases you then I am sorry. Thanks for reading though