Really liking the interaction the character and Chloe, starting to get good now can't wait for future chapters

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mayhaps there be some future competition between the daring Pegasus and this young maiden

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That picture made my day
As for your theory...well, you'll see.

Holy hay only this morning this thing appeared and its already got over 50 likes! Your doing something right here!

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I aim to please!

Good job good sir.
I can't wait to see the next chapter.

2252884 Oh really now? Falling in line with your characters there, are we?

Don't understand why the dislikes?

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I don't understand either but meh, what am I gonna do about it? I'm just grateful to the people that do like my story so far, such as yourself. Thanks!

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LOLZ!!! Loved this chapter!

2263491 Because there are people who don't like the story. I'd say it's probably something about the writing style or that it's made little progress in 3 chapters that it could have made in one or maybe two.

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As for your comment on the writing style: Ya, I can see that it needs a bit more description but as for the progress: Have you ever considered that that is the reason that some people like it? Unlike most clop-fics, its actually focusing on the story. To me it just seems like the writer isn't just trying to make some half-assed attempt at writing a story, he/she is actually focusing on the plot. The slow and careful pace of the story makes it seem realistic and that's a what some people seem to want, especially considering the average clop-fic and besides the longer the story the better,right? Then again everyone is entitled to their opinion.
P.S: T.X.B, WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE?!?!