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Interesting. I liked it!
Good read, I liked how unprepaired they ended up being.
Not bad, I wish you luck with your next story.
This is funny.
lol! that ending!
I know the story says complete, but somehow the whole thing makes me feel that something more could be done with the characters. it has much more effort than I usually find in changeling-ships.
So... Make love, not war? This was really fun, clever, and very well-written. Excellent short story.
BTW, second to last line is missing a quotation mark:
"Oh, come on! He stomped a hoof in frustration. should be
"Oh, come on!" He stomped a hoof in frustration.
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Good catch. I fixed it. Glad you enjoyed it!
lawl
Dang, I thought it was going to be necromorphs... and then I wondered what it was doing in romance.
2095141 LOL WUT eww
I really liked this story. The soldier mentality, as well as the camaraderie, really make it.
And that sex scene; bingo. Perfect combo of romance and... ahem.
Keep it up!
--Warlord
LOL! XD Those last few lines are hilarious!
Great story! =D
lol now that was a funny as story
"Which one" <---that made me fall to the floor, howling in laughter.
I liked very much. And now i am curious if you have a story shipping Squall and the main character.
Lol
To me, that was the funniest line in this story.
I didn't find the ending funny at all, like most did.
Have a like.
Hahah, nice. Liked it.
I wonder if they eventually did manage to establish some real contact with the changelings.