Um how old is Star Shine because I'm not sure if Luna was around when she was younger.

Also I'm surprised that the CMC actually managed to change a diaper, I guess their maternal insticts kicked in (kids these days).

2062344 Star Shine, not Starlight. And the flash back was 2 months previous too the story :)

2062344 Eh the way I see it is Apple Bloom probably has younger cousins, and hey who knows maybe they have Anatomy class?

This was a good chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Now for teh all important, 'critical' opinion.

I think you may have possibly overused the urinating and messing slightly... I know its a side affect from the potion but still. It seemed just a bit excessive.

I can see Sweetie Belle and maybe Apple Bloom knowing how to change a diaper, but I just don't see it in Scootaloo... somehow, I feel Scootaloo would make a mess of it... pun intended...

Anyway, those are really the only things I found that I didn't like, also, two years old, hmm... seems young for the intelligence level Thunder Chaser is acting at. She seems to be acting around 3 or 4... two works, I don't think you have to explain to everypony that she 'still isn't potty trained' as 2 is still acceptable for not being potty trained, its when you get around 3 or 4 that you have to worry.

2065919 Thanks Midnight. I felt as if i was over using the wetting/messing but I wasn't 100% sure so I just kind of rolled with it. As for Scootaloo, I dunno I think she could easily know. We know pretty much nothing about her home life, so I dunno maybe she has a little sister or something?

And again maybe 2 is a little too young for her. Might just go back and change it to 3.

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-_- We all know Scoots only has one sister and its Dash...

*Prince of Darkenss* THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE SISTER TO SCOOTALOO

*Ozzy* SHARON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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references... yes

How did you find out that a sharp change in temperature would affect the bladder of a toddler or is that just another side effect of the potion?(It makes the user senstive to an increase or decrease in temperature)

2064660 Well we do know that ponies mature faster than humans so even though they may assume they are Elementary age it's possible they're a little older, in this case possibly old enough for that theory to make sense.

2070445 A Sharp change in temperature can cause such things in humans. I figured it would be an interesting thing to add, and I can't keep spoiling effects of the potion lol I want SOME things to be kept secret lol.

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It's not just an ABDL Story. You'll see.

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Joined! Thank you sir.

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Not a problem!

2185214 I uh don't know if that's a good thing?

Oh! I wonder what will happen! I know it will be devias...
I'll wear this mustache....

2185249 you should update this dude! Its awesome!!!!