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Midnight Shadows


Been a member since 2012, never realized there was a bio line until the end of 2018, I TAKE WRITING COMMISSIONS! :D lol. I don't do roleplays.

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:rainbowlaugh:Another foal-ish adventure midnight?
Will read after school :raritywink:
I love these, they inspire some of my own ageplay type fics.

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Oh, thank you! I'm glad I can inspire another writer :twilightsmile:

But lets just say after this one, the next story won't be so Foal-ish........lol.

This is cool and DAAWWW

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There will be more of that. But there will be some other stuff to, but as always pending on what the other stuff is, if you don't like it don't read it.

There will be plenty more "Foalish" adventures with Midnight don't worry. There may be some Foalish adventures with some of the manes 6 too.....who knows, I don't write for views or ratings, I write for myself to help me work through some of the things in my life, and then I share my writings, so it will vary a lot the stuff I write.

1758888 So what else is there going to be? I love foalishness but what else is there going to be?

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Well I don't want to spoil it anymore than I already have, but if you've read the current chapter you'll see Thunder saying "You owe me" a lot to Midnight....yeah....thats a foreshadow to future mature rated stories.

This chapter was a punch in the feels, well done. :fluttershysad:

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Thank you, Originally this story was meant to be a comedy...kinda not turning out that way, but the comedy will return. I just felt I needed explanation on certain aspects of the overall story arc...because apparently my stories are turning into a series I guess.....lol.

cuteness, then I felt like Wile E Coyote if the anvil were made of tears...

In others AWWWWWW :fluttercry:

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Its easy to put emotional roller coasters like that in stories when you're pulling inspiration from your own life.

:pinkiesad2: You Midnight, have managed to serious my mood. Though already serious, in a sad way. Though already sad, inspired...

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Um, you're welcome? I think....:rainbowhuh:

I feel for Midnight, I lost my mom 6 years ago, I was only 8. Well, congrats for THE FEELS! Continue this my friend

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I'm sorry for your loss. I hope the story hasn't upset you....

1780590 Its alright, Midnight is so cute. And the bath scene, with Midnight washing Star "down there: and Clover coming in, is a CLASSIC example of the "This isn't what this looks like" TV trope. Many LOLs were had. Also, what spell was a FILLY doing that VAPORIZED two whole rows of ponies? Keep it up :pinkiehappy:

1759703 Could he possibly be planning to turn Midnight into a colt? :trixieshiftright:

1781279 The spell sounds like what Twilight did during her entrance exam, only worse. :raritycry:

1781689you could be right maybe theres a bunch of sentient cacti walking around

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You'll have to read to find out.

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That was my inspiration for the kind of spell.

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I highly doubt a spell that vaporized everything within 10 feet created sentient cacti...but we never know...

1783896 or maybe Owloiciuos maybe Midnights brother or dad

As we never found out his backstory. Heck owliscious has been starswirl the bearded

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There is talk between me and my editor about the SLIM POSSIBILITY That her family survived somewhere. You'll know in one of the upcoming stories as I've decided to turn most of my stories into one continuous story arc. (Well, at least the next few stories anyway)

I just managed to read both chapters and I liked what I saw.

I liked the character interactions between Clover, Midnight and Thunder are having together. They seem pretty close together like an actual family and I like that. While it's Thunder's first time being turned into a foal (from what I've read) he does seem to have a realistic consenting attitude towards his regression. Unable to understand what's going on and feeling awkward due to the change in age and how he is being treated.

How long did it exactly take you to write this story? I mean, 8,000 and 4,000 words is quite a large amount. I usually write around 2,500 to 5,000 words in my stories. So it's pretty impressive that you've written that much.

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Ohhh...lets see, chapter one was written in the span of two days...chapter two was written the night before it went up. chapter three (Hopefully the finally to this story) is taking a few days because I'm sick and I'm all like "I don't feel like thinking right now" so it may take a few days.

I hope that answers your question...I'm a really fast writer....lol. Then again, I don't have a day job.

Edit*: This is his first time being a foal, and no he doesn't like it that much. lol.

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chapter one was written in the span of two days...chapter two was written the night before it went up.

I would've killed myself if I attempted to write that much. I'm pretty lazy but I try and get the job done. Again, impressive.

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would've killed yourself eh? Been there.....literally.

Anyway, I don't really have a job and I do school online so I generally spend about at least 6 hours writing a day. Various things not just these stories.

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I go to college and have a family to support, I'm not a father. Hell no, I'm 16.

I just got to support my own family due to hard times.

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I hear that, having hard times and such......I could sit down and talk for over 2 hours and still not have chipped the surface in hard times......writing is very much my outlet, my expression of feelings, release of stress. If I didn't have my writing, I probably wouldn't be on this world today.

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Strangely... I agree with you and... well, writing is the same for me.

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It feels good to openly reveal why I write.....

Writing is so, just so much expression, there have been times where I'd think about doing things...dark things....but I wrote it out....writing is such a therapeutic tool for me....I can't even put it in words ironically even though most of my expressed feeling is words.

Ok im sorry but the last part made me cry a lil
Very well done so far I look forward to the next chapter :)

64 weeks after the last comment, the last chapter... I hope she is ok

heh childhood tragedies...Something I live by. How I live

what the fuck vaporized 12 ponies? holy shit.......

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Frankly, I don't remember what the excuse for that was.

5023476 yay.... can i kill you now? lelz

This ever gunna continue?

5582538 When I originally wrote this I started to write the next chapter, however I also started to suffer from extreme anxiety. I stopped writing for some time during that and when I came back to it I tried and failed at writing more of it. While yes I have plans to write more of it, It's probably not going to happen anytime soon.

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