The Sparkle's Gone Out

by lightenupmyday

Discontinued!

Going over this story I have found that it was not only thought out improperly, but had a general idea that was unpleasant for me to read. Now, whether I wrote it or not I have come to terms with the fact that i'm a horrible author, and am incapable of writing a story over 15 thousand words, in which I would like to say I give up on writing and will from now on journey down a different path, this was quite fun whilst it lasted. Apologies to any one who believes this is the wrong way for me to go about things. Good day, and good bye.

Comments

[Varanus]

Most authors think their work is terrible when they reread it. Keep writing and keep seeking different feedback, you'll definitely improve. Hang in there.

[Zombificus]

I can't say i didn't see something like this coming when you uploaded that other chapter way back in the day, but still, it was quite a surprise. Personally, i think you're being way too harsh on yourself, i thought the first chapter of this was nicely written and really interesting, i even added it to favourites (back then, i was really picky about what i'd favourite, it took something that really impressed me to get in there) and i'd have loved to see more of the story.
But this is your choice to make, and if you feel that quitting writing is the thing you have to do, then i respect that.

Goodbye, friend, and good luck.

[lunaisthebest]

3351245
dude... you stole my words before i even saw this

[lightenupmyday]

3351245 Well what do you suggest? If I can't even finish a mere 1,000 word story, how am I to finish a 350,000 word one?

[Zombificus]

3377186 Did i offend you or something? Because that reply seemed a little hostile.

I only meant to say that while i am sad about the story, i respect your decision and wish you the best of luck in future. Sorry if anything in my first comment offended you.

[lightenupmyday]

3405987 Sorry for the hostility...Just a bit on edge right now.