RD has been born an alicorn, and she's very confused about life in general. She's never eaten an apple, never gotten a cutie mark, never have even known about The Wonderbolts. She does all of these for the first time with hurdles in the way.
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I'm glad you like it so much 
Oh yeah! I'm in the process of this next chapter so please be patient.
You know, every now and then, I need a break from writing my own fics and reading all of those intense epics that keep making the featured secion(as well as those that don't.), and have a nice light read. Thank you for providing me something to take a break with.
Tense changes
tense changes everywhere
2365473
what this guy said
but srsly dash is always gay everywhere
always
fillyfoolerforever
on the other hand this story has alicorn rainbow and apparently will have best pony so i will watch it
2365473
Glad to help!
2365547
Very true, RD is the first one you look at and think "FILLY-FOOLER 4 LYF" Im Glad you like it too parasprite
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yay
I can't do this, the story is poorly written and the story itself is stupid. And then there is the fact that it has absolutely nothing to do with
. That is what bothers me the least, it could just be a misplaced tag, but you really need to rewrite everything. I recommend taking this down until you can have a proper version that should actually be seen by others.
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Another fact is, this is my first story and i enjoy writing it, I don't really care about your opinion or you could be at least nicer about your feedback...
2369148
Any story that is well written no matter how enervating the plot deserves some level of recognition, the same goes for any great idea that is poorly presented.
I think what irritates me the most, which I think is of least concern to your story, is the fact that it was presented as an alicorn Rainbow fic, despite the fact that the main character is an OC, not just Dash with a horn.
We normally don't have quality control in our group but I simply cannot deem that this story has anything to do with Alicorn Rainbow.
I will give you one chance to defend why this shouldn't be removed from the group.
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What group?
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The Alicorn Rainbow group, I invited you to join yesterday. That invitation still stands. And I am sorry if I came on as a bid of a jerk, I tend to do that sometimes. Your story just, well needs work, you can keep the plot, even if I don't quite understand it, but the form (the presentation) really needs improvements.
Now the reason why I talked about the group is because you seem like the kind of user that would like a group such as ours and it is always a good idea to have a story in a groups archive. It is one of the best ways to promote a story when it's not popular enough to get featured and even if it is, it won't be in the feature box forever but it will be in the archives forever so groups are really a great way to get readers to your story as they are for people with similar interests.
Once again I apologize for coming on as a jerk. I sometimes become a bit more confrontational then I ought to.
Ps. Some people also tend to call me a cockhead, I don't know what they can be referring to
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I'm also sorry, I've been kinda hot-headed as of late, parent divorces never leave you the same. Anyway, this is something for fun, so if it pleases me, i'm happy with it. As for the group, I'll think about it.
2369291
Åh man, that sucks there is nothing worse then the breakup of holy matrimony. I don't know what to say, I'm sorry
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No need to say anything, thanks though.
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Hehe, glad you like, and i try :)
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Thanks, I've been trying to cope with it different ways (emo once, never again) and thanks for your kindness. And i also hope you get through it too.
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That's good, yeah, same with my dad. I tried to replicate what my dad did to my mom in my Scootaloo fic, but VERY tame.
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Yeah, the problem is i loved my dad when he wasn't drunk or beating me for no good reason. He was such a good dad when he wasn't do all that. I made the mistake of punching him once, ill message you what he did.
Why have I only just seen this is the Alicorn Rainbow group!!???
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Hehe, im not sure but thanks for the fav!
MOAR PLEASE!!
Q: how is it possible that the parents have to be killed to set the alicorn free because Luna and Celestia are sisters
A: IMPOSSIBLE
it says that cadence is married to shining but twilight is either youngnor jot alive yet so shinig is still a teenager so he cant be married
Shouldn't alicorns have curie marks especially as teens and be born young Cu's I have seen lots of woona picfures
To be honest, pacing is beyond bad, the plot is quite scattered, the other plot looks nice (hehe lol), and I have no idea where you plan on going with this. But it is somewhat interesting, so I think I will follow it...
Moar pls?
Well this is progressing quite rapidly.