• Member Since 8th Mar, 2012
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My Bio is something a bit too private ok?


A certain Rainbow maned pony has made her dreams come true and had a date with a certain Wonderbolt. She is now a member of the wonderbolts and she will tell us the story of what happened so far as she wonders what shall happen later in her life

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Comments ( 14 )

I wonder what's gonna happen next...

Dash and soarin sitting on a cloud k.i.s.s.i.n.g

Readers I would like for all of you to have your opinions on my very first fan fiction and also some tips as well.:pinkiehappy:

Good Story! 10 rainbow kisses for you!

Story was too damn fast, but I still liked it. :rainbowkiss:

@ZoomthePony and MarkusH&PFenix thnx thnat means a lot to me.

It's a sweet story, but next time maybe give it to an editor or something, there's quite a few spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes. The centering of the story kind of annoyed me, but that's just me. :twilightsmile: With some work, it'll be a really good story.

392903 thanks for the the advice

393006 It's okay, I'm having problems with my own stories and I'm glad to help other people out with their stories :twilightsmile:

393016 Now, back to reading stories! :pinkiehappy:

hello every pony I have something to say: I will be gone for 4 - 6 weeks for my vacation at Fillydelphia, So no new stories until I return to Ponyville

- Rosie Rose

You might need to consider using different transitions & some grammar and spelling errors were seen, but other than those minor flaws this is a very good read :twilightsmile:

516871 are you not back yet its been like 80 weeks

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