A seapony is called upon to teach a group of newfry how to be seaponies. Funny things happen.
This is a story set in an alternate form of the Conversion Bureau universe, where bureaus by the sea get a potion that has the power to transform a human into four species. As well as the classic three, there's a chance you'll become a seapony.
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Not bad...
You need to make a new paragraph whenever a different character speaks. That second paragraph is doing it wrong.
And why on earth do Lily and her mother hate seaponies so much?
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I'll fix the grammar problem now and have Lily explain things in the next chapter.
Not bad, there are grammar derps around but I'm not going to obsess over them. Overall the story looks good so far, so keep it up.
Haha, see the sea ponies.
Yay, new, great chapter
Keep calm and continue writing.
Very interesting story, looking forward to more.
I can't look at the word Kelpie without thinking of that painful one-shot villain sue from the comics.
I wonder if these ones like explosives? (If you get the reference, YOU ROCK) It's from The MLP Loops