A lot can change in a year. As best friends growing up in Cloudsdale, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash experience the changes that come with the passing of seasons, and discover things about life, the wide world, and each other as their friendship grows stronger.
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Aww, needs a sad tag. I'm lovin' it so far, keep it up!
1854409 I think this fic ended up being a bit more of a downer than I originally imagined. It won't be this sad all the way through, but I think you're right; I'll go ahead and add the "sad" tag. Glad you're liking it!
Awesome, awesome. A few spots whre it should have commas instead of periods, however It is enjoyable.
Gotta track this one.
Random time:
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What is yours? Mine is:
Discord dies and gives you all of their money.
1856290 I often use periods rather than commas to prevent run-on sentences. Sorry if that bothered you. But thank you very much for the comment, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Eugh. Stuck on the moon with Queen Chrysalis.
Cute! It's always cool to read about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's relationship when they were little. Awesome start
Oh, and on the birthday pony thing, I was actually banished to the moon with Discord. I just realized that was one of the examples up top.
1857092 Thank you! I've always though those two had a really sweet friendship, especially when they were younger.
Nice! Funny--I often don't read sad fics, but even though this has a sad thread, it doesn't seem too sad, because Dash has Fluttershy. Anyway, I liked it.
1909042 Thank you. I wasn't entirely sure if it needed the sad tag, but the later chapters might deserve it. I'm very glad you liked it!
I liked it! The characteristic anti-sappy-reflex of Dash was sudden and perfect.
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...moving purposely...
"purposefully" might be a better word-choice here.
2701562 Thank you! Glad you liked it. And thanks for the correction, I'll fix it immediately.
Dream Theater FTW
I really enjoyed this, and do hope you one day decide to continue it. It has a lot of potential.
You can has review!
Oh, it’s an instant favorite for me. That was so precious and really nicely written! The characters were captured well. Stellar job!
