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Fluttershy, Fluttershy, Fluttershy can hardly fly
Fluttershy had been bullied and laughed at for as long as she can remember. Laughed at for not being able to fly.
"What kind of Pegasus doesn't fly, Fluttercry?"
But with the help of her newfound friend Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy has to learn to stand up for herself and face her fear of flight, and find her wings.
Inspired by Aviators' Fear of Flight

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Well, this must be the first time I saw a picture of Rainbow Dash bandaging up Fluttershy instead of the other way around.
Now, speaking of the story itself.. I guess it's not that bad at all. I'm interested in what happens next.

Interesting idea, can't wait to see more. :twilightsmile:

You know I thought this was a good story and I, like the other two said, am quite interested in seeing what happens next

Beautiful story! Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:!

Ya got 18 likes :ajbemused:
Can I have some crackers with this cheese?

I love this story so much! I love this cheese. :heart:

omg i knew it was based on the song, it one of my fave songs! im glad you turned it into a story!!!!:heart:

Full review here, but in brief: this should be tagged [Slice of Life], not [Random]. As such, it has some nice bits with Rainbow protecting Fluttershy and a cute ending. Everything happens much too fast, though.

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