• Member Since 9th Dec, 2012
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tosety


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written before season 3
also my first story and bad enough that I'm tempted to remove it.

Who were the original elements of harmony? How did it come to be that Celestia and luna were the only two remaining?

Celestia gathers the mane 6 to tell them the true history of Equestria.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )

Damn, Shawty, these chapters be hella short!

There are a metric buttload of problems with this story, but it's 4am so I'll just make chocolate pudding because I've lost control of my life summarise it briefly.

The pacing's faster than a runaway freight train, plot's more strained than a cup of Chinese tea and the characters are so badly OOC that I think they may actually just be pony-shaped robots on some odd mission to confuse as many readers as possible.

well, this is my first story I've ever written, hopefully I will get better as I work on it

Comment posted by suckmyponycock69 deleted Jan 14th, 2013
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