Longtime fic author for other series, father of two, and I enjoy MLP:FiM with my whole family.
It has been exactly one year since the defeat of Nightmare Moon and the return of Princess Luna. As preparations get underway for the Summer Sun Celebration once again, Luna is called upon to fulfill a promise she made to the very ponies who saved her from the Nightmare.
This was my submission to Happy Luna's Super Magically Fun Storytime Adventure Challenge held by Midnight Shadow on Equestria Daily.
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THIS.
This needs to be an episode. This must be sent to the writing staff so they can incorporate this into the actual show. Wait...
MAYBE YOU ARE THE WRITING STAFF?!
But seriously, nice work. Definitely Celestia/Luna-tier. Maybe Luna-in-socks-tier, even.
That's 4 1/2 happy Pinkie Pies out of 5.
It's nice to see a story where everyone is fully in character!
no words can describe how EFFING GOOD THIS IS!!! good work!!
this must be made into an episode at once
*WILD APPLAUSE*
A great, fun story that paced itself like an episode. You did fantastic!
* reads luna's flashback at the prank in the Gala.
- Oh boy, she's going to dress as Nightmare Moon and scare everypony!
*continues reading.
EVERYTHING WENT SLIGHTLY BETTER THAN EXPECTED
Aww, CMC and Luna fluff, I love it! I just love these pairings, added with Luna's given personality. It's very common to see people use the "Joyful and Kindhearted Ruler" Luna, making her the best Luna. You did wonderfully on this story, five stars.
Astounding! Loved it, I wish it was an episode! I could actually see Luna becoming a mentor to the Cutie Mark Crusaders. This story really needs more attention, it was so cute.
My heart, it's so warm. I need icecubes, I'm gonna overheat.
Kudos on this lovely fic.
Well, after your introduction to this (after the Gala), now I know why the Royal Sisters are called Trollestia and Trolluna so often around here...
Seriously though, everyone else who's commented is right. I don't know whether the writing staff accepts fan submissions or not, but you should at least try to get this into their hands and see what they do with it....
I would love to see the reaction when DT and SS find out that THE CMC ARE THE STUDENTS OF Luna