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Megawacky Max

A brony from South America who wants to give Pony Fiction a chance. Let's see what I can make, here!


The day after Nightmare Night, Twilight wonders where was Rarity during the celebrations. A visit to her house may provide insightful clues, even if it means enduring a story where, whatever it happens, Twilight can not laugh.

Nor should YOU. Rarity doesn't like it.

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Comments ( 34 )

I got a rock.... that is hilarious, does show that Twilight is right when she first came to Ponyville, everypony in this town is crazy! Nice little story to read before Halloween ~Celestia's Paladin


#3 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · ·


The odds of her getting only rocks are...
Even more so if they are space rocks.

#5 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · ·

That was great! Good job, thank you for the entertainment and laughs!:rainbowlaugh:

That was quite hilarious my good sir :moustache:

It's the Great Pumpkin, Rarity!

I bet all those rocks have a gem inside them. :pinkiecrazy:

I felt bad for laughing at Rarity......... oh well, she didn't see me, so it's okay. :rainbowlaugh:

I am proud to say I did not laugh at all. That poor girl.:raritycry:

I didn't laugh. It wasn't that hard....... :pinkiecrazy:

oh luna when she said "i got a rock" the first time i died. great little story :twilightsmile:

I did my best to not laugh along with the story but the second she said "...I got a rock", I imagined Rarity dressed up in the multi-eyed, ghost costume Charlie Brown wore and him saying, "I got a rock". I was laughing the rest of the story

That could be a CMC story!



Poor Rarity.

And your English is FANTASTIC.

I remember Cyanmane got a hoof-full of licorice worms (eww), Hoverwings got several chocolate-covered sugar cubes, and Sapphire Gleam found a couple of jawbreakers in her bag."

Rarity paused purposefully for greater effect. She took a long, deliberate sip from her cup. Twilight waited, patiently, and then...

"... I got a rock."

You're a good pony Rarity Brown. :pinkiesmile:

I didn't laugh at Rarity's story, I laughed at Twilight's reactions to her story... That doesn't count does it?

I tried very hard not to, but I laughed. Very little mind you and I disguised it with a cough. Do you think Rarity noticed?

I just barely managed not to laugh. :rainbowkiss:

#20 · Nov 1st, 2011 · · ·

This story was delicious.

You have to love this fandom. If a character is in a scene? They get a fic written, art produced, romance, backstory, crippling psychological disorder, alternate universe personality, etc.

If they're not in a scene? They get fanfics explaining why!

Well written and, while I most certainly didn't laugh, :raritydespair: I found it... Edifying. Yes. Edifying.

Snort. :pinkiehappy:

#22 · Nov 2nd, 2011 · · ·

Tom's babies but in the past.

:flutterrage: LOVE ME RARITY!:raritydespair:

Well done. Very few mistakes, better than most native English speakers on this site. Did Rarity think to check the rocks and see if there were gems inside?

Firstly, your English is great. In fact, so is your writing style.

Secondly, I too can admit to not laughing... the first time. On the second time, I must admit I laughed.

Thanks for the fic and keep up the best work!

p.s. On the guest answer test, I got Applejack. Would it have accepted best pony?

First of all... your English is, quite possibly, better than the average American's. Which is sad. :applecry:

Secondly... Charlie Brown. Only with ponies. You, sir, have won the internet. Here. *hands over internet*

And Thirdly... I'll like to see a follow up explaining WHY Rarity kept getting rocks. With Charlie Brown, you kinda see it coming-- it's just the way life rolls for him... or over him, as it were. With Rarity... why would the adults be so mean to her?

Wow, this was really good. Didn't get the Charlie Brown reference until I looked at the comments and then it clicked. I......really need to look at the classics some more.

Would like to know why Rarity kept on getting rocks but great story anyway.

I kinda felt bad for Rarity. Somepony get her some candy! :pinkiegasp:

Well I would want to go yell at the people who gave me a rock, but then again I get full of extreme rage too often. That means that it might not end with my use of harsh words.

This got me thinking of an Iron Will slogan: :flutterrage: Give Rarity nothing but a rock, and I will clean your bucking clock.

I actually did get a rock once. A neighbor was a geologist and gave all the kids polished stones. It was kinda cool.

Days later, the CMC were trying to get their cutie marks in kite flying. However, they were flying their kites near the Everfree Forest, which has a special kind of tree that loves to eat kites.

Ah crap you just summoned Starlight, and she's revving up a dozen chainsaws...

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