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Mystery1


Welcome to my profile! I’m a new writer on this site and I’m mainly looking for feedback on my work. I hope you enjoy my stories and I look forward to writing more!

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This story is a sequel to It's Not What It Looks Like!


After practicing some flying techniques, Rainbow Dash and Soarin head inside to relax a little. Since Soarin exercises more frequently than Dash, he’s able to recover faster than her.

Of course, Dash is completely exhausted, lying down on the bed in their room. While she complained about her aching wings, Soarin decided to give her a massage, but quickly finds something else other than a wing ache.

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Comments ( 8 )

Why it be that Soarin is always such a good husband/boyfriend in fanfics? I'm not complaining I just identify with him, treat the person you love as you would like to be treated and Soarin is an example of that

I have a suggestion, it may change the story or not depending on what you are planning. But I would love to see a one shot of Soarin with Scootaloo, like a father-daughter moment. If it's one thing I love, it's Those family moments

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Spot on! I believe he’s a great friend and in a better relationship with Rainbow.

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Thanks for the suggestion! I can try to make a story including Scootaloo in this one-shot series.

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This sounds cool, never seen those two together anywhere.

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In the works, gonna be adding Rainbow in there so it fits the storyline as well.

Ok another cute story I like that so it looks like rainbow and Soarin got back from training and everything and rainbow was pretty beat so he offer her some massage which that was nice of him but it looks like he discovered a tickle spot or soft spots of rainbow which she never expected that but still it is pretty cute keep up the good work

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