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Mystery1


Welcome to my profile! I’m a new writer on this site and I’m mainly looking for feedback on my work. I hope you enjoy my stories and I look forward to writing more!

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This story is a sequel to Softie


Scootaloo asks Rainbow Dash for some flying tips, but is given something a lot better. Instead of boring herself and her filly friend, Dash takes her and flies up to her home to help her practice flying in the clouds.

Upon arrival, Soarin is impressed at how much of a fan she is of Rainbow Dash, opting to introduce himself as well. Scootaloo was an ambitious pony, and to top it all off, she matched Dash's desire to fly.

Mistake? Yes.

Worth it? Yes.

Of course she’d be a happy to see a Wonderbolt, but how much happier would she be if she learned a few flying tricks from one? Well, at least he meant well, as things don’t go according to plan.

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Comments ( 22 )

That was nice! Always thought she's a late bloomer

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Yeah, me too. Seems like she’s learning, though!

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mhm. Soarin/dash was one of the things that got me into the fandom

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Same here! I always liked show but the fandom added so much more enjoyment to the series.

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mhm. Sadly, i suck at Equestria only stories, getting only short works done. I tried a star wars crossover with scoots once as one of my first fics

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This is my first time ever writing stories, and this one is only a handful from when I started around a week ago on this site. Thanks for your comment!

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i saw it, and you do rather well

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Thank you. Im glad people enjoy my stories. Also, if you have an idea for a story, don’t hesitate to PM me it! This story was made as a request/idea from another user.

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sure, though i dont want to overwhelm yuo

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Don’t worry, if you have an idea, please let me know in PMs! I have no other messages right now and I’ll make a plan to work on it.

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i might have one or 2. but not sure what to make of it

Comment posted by rosiecliff deleted March 21st

AAHHH!!! HE MENTIONED TO ME I AM VERY HAPPY. *COUGH COUGH* a beautiful story indeed, technically I haven't read it yet, but Due to your previous work, I'm sure you'll be as amazing as ever. Thank you for this Rainbow and Soarin story, especially for adding Scootaloo :heart::twilightblush:

The ending was super cute, I loved it so much

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Thanks for the idea!

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I hope you enjoyed it!

Soarin's jaw dropped, looking at Rainbow and then at Scootaloo, before his ears flopped down to drown out the screaming.

Yeah I remember how excited when she meet Rainbow Dash's parents

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Hah! I’m happy someone mentioned that because it was exactly why I added that in.

“That…was…awesome!” She replied, hugging Soarin with her hooves.

Just like rainbow when it comes to Adrenaline or almost falling to a certain death they get super excited

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Hey maybe on your next story maybe you should have rainbow introduced her parents to soarin it would be interesting how the reaction would be

Wow another adorable one here so it looks like rainbow and Soarin going to have a visitor and it was Scootaloo and she was pretty excited to learn how to fly and also learning that soarin is a Wonderbolt and the excitement was increase but anyway it looks like rainbows still tried to teach her how to fly but failing so Soarin want to give it a try to teach her how to fly and it kind of work which that's awesome and he even took her a little flying which that was pretty sweet although he kind of went a little bit too much and letting Scootaloo fell but luckily he caught her and no surprises there she was pretty excited for that and to be honest I like the moment between those two keep up the good work

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That sounds like a great idea! I’ll try to work on that soon.

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