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Gormless Wheaton


Full of Regret and Thinly Veiled Contempt

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Shining Armor just wanted to spend some quality with his daughter. But now much more is on the line.

She thinks he's lame, and he has no choice but to prove her wrong.

Originally a standalone idea I was playing with, now an entry in the Shining Armor is a Terrible Dad 2024 Competition. And ain't that a mouthful?

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Comments ( 6 )

"Yes, dear," Shining murmured with his head hanging. Cadance scowled at him before slipping out the door. Once she was gone Shining took a deep breath and sighed miserably. Then he hummed in surprise when Flurry scooted up and nuzzled him.

"Love you, Dad." He scoffed and nuzzled her back.

Nice to see that even in her "It's not a phase, Mom!" phase, Flurry isn't as doom and gloom as she pretends to be. Hopefully, she'll apologize to Aunty Twilight eventually about calling the school lame.

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A Lovely story. Thank you for the submission

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And thank you for reading.

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Considering Starlight became the headmare and went through a similar phase, there could be common ground upon which Flurry's eyes are opened. Or Trixie helps her invoke one of the dark rituals she was reading about. That'd probably do it, too.

Yeah. Getting Discord to bring back Sombra to try to look cool would have to be pretty close to the top of being a bad father. Good story though.

Funniest story I’ve read all week.😂👌

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