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Aether Spark
I'm a highly imaginative and clever storymaker with a great imagination and desire to make great stories, I'm very dedicated to my stories and will always do my best to finish them. :)
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Like I said, clop is pretty much just implied or talked about here, but not seen, I'll admit clop makes me uncomfortable to write.
Is this a another fusion story?
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I can't spoil it but this one is a real plot twister
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Right…
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Is there a problem? I really can't say anything due to how delicate the secrets of the plot are.
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There are no problem here
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So to answer your question now that this chapter is out yes there is fusion per sey in here but that stuff is fun to write, right?
What do you mean by that?
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Mainly in the second part, I am debating on whether I want to make it an attachment to this story or a separate story.
Let's just say Celestia get's more ruthless
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that what I talking about!
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Why is it a big deal?
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Because I going to add this story in the rest of the flies in pony fusion group!
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Sorry I guess, I didn't want to spoil the events of this chapter.
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anyway after both Harmony and Emerald deal with sisters will they’d do something later after theirs victory, if you know what I mean
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You bet
the idea has potential, but it is poorly implemented.
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😟
Why's that?
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In many ways, a bad impression is left by the fact that the narration is going too fast. Such plots usually take quite a long time, gradually escalating the intrigue. After that, at the moment of climax, the intrigue should be revealed and then something should happen. Everything is so fast with you that the intrigue does not have time to be felt.
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I guess that makes sense, but I already wrote it, I could try to make part 2 have more intrigue though.
And if you want you can be my observer on progress.
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I will keep an eye on this work.
in theory, there should be a culmination now, after which the denouement and completion of the plot should take place within two or three chapters. However, this will be the second part. Well, let's see if the guns will fire in the next work.
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If you want, when I work on it I can give you access to the doc to get some in-presence pointers as I'm making the story, that would help me improve the second part alot.
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I will be glad to help
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Thanks
Dios mio eso fue increíble, ve asi a celestia es algo que no espere.