The snowflakes

Each snowflake has a meaning.

Opalin Arcana spends some time alone in her castle and thinks about many memories.

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Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #1 · January 5th · 2 · ·

Cute cover art, btw.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #2 · January 5th · 3 · ·

Needs more spaces of narratives

Overall, it was cute.

You know, we never really got to learn more about the relationship between Opaline and Misty in the show. Yeah I know, the relationship shown between the two was very obviously toxic, but I meant of like, what about during Misty's childhood? Did Misty see Opaline as a mother?
What did Opaline think of Misty back then?

But that might just be me.
The show really had potential.

JD1

JD1 #3 · January 5th · 1 · ·

Cute cover to go along with such a nice and warm story. Solid stuff.

NovemberDragon

NovemberDragon #4 · January 6th · 1 · ·

Its so cute!

redandready45

redandready45 #5 · January 6th · 1 · ·

The "Opaline was once a loving mother figure" is an interesting dynamic, and I think you do it pretty well. The opening is a little bit awkward,

I approached the fireplace and put some more wood in. I then stood there for a moment, taking in the warmth. I am not really bothered by the cold, in fact, I actually prefer it. Well, at least when there is magic. It was for my own sake so much as for... her.

I think you meant to write. "It wasn't for my own sake so much as it was for... her."

But overall, your take on their relationship was wonderful.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #6 · January 6th · 1 · ·

Okay that's actually pretty cute to show the softer side of Opaline and even Misty showed her the snow Pony which that's always so nice keep up the good work

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