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Discombobulated Soul


As a writer, my expansive vocabulary and thorough knowledge of grammar are my only saving graces. Please help, the world is too vorticose and gyratory!

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Sky Stinger and his best friend elected not to go home for Hearth's Warming, for various reasons. Luckily, the Wonderbolts' celebration provides all the holiday spirit they need. There are things to be said between the two and, by the end of it, their relationship may never be the same.

Sky certainly hopes so.


Written for Darkblaze15 for Jinglemas 2023. This was a blast to write!

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Thank you for accepting and envisioning my Jinglemas prompt into such a fantastic and fun story to read! In the interest of giving a brief spoiler-free review here, here are my overall thoughts:

I really enjoyed the character interactions and how you built upon the dynamic between Sky and Vapor following the events of Top Bolt. The other Wonderbolts characters you added were fun touches and helped to flesh out little details that would come into play later in the story. I enjoyed the way everything culminated together towards the end as well as showcasing sides of the characters we may not have been used to seeing before.

Thanks again for helping to make this story happen!

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