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Good story really intersting so far looking forward to more
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Thank you! I appreciate it im kinda rolling with general ideas for the story as I go so I'm hopeing to make it a interesting read I'm working on the second chapter right now bit probably won't finish it till sometime after Christmas
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Nice happy chrismess lad
What and why the hell does Nightmare Moon ( I think? ) is after you!?
You just got here.
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It's actually Luna how he saw her in his dream was different than when Luna entered it he doesn't dream a lot and when he does it's very vague dreams Luna when she entered his mind warped his perception of her in the dream.
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Luna really needs to clarify that she isn't an enemy.
Thanks for the update <3
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Your welcome my chapters might be slow but I'll do my best to try and make them decent heh I'm still nervous that I'll do really bad with this fanfic even though I have passion for it
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Take your time, nothing wrong with being nervous, the simple fact that you're actually writing a fanfic makes you braver than most.
Nice
I say give it two weeks and he's been thinking those female ponies look awful pretty
Nice chapter, it's cool of it takes a while
Into my library you go!
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Thank you so much if ya have any advice or ideas I'm all ears I'm makeing the story kinda as I go with a rough guide of the ideas I've had for a long time in my head so any way I can improve it for the people who read be great! ^0^
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Thank you I just get nervous that I might be upsetting people with how long it takes me to post ^^'
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It's better to take your time, I wouldn't want you to rush and the quality of the story to drop. Slow and steady wins the race after all. " ~(/•~•)/~
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Well thank you I appreciate that I'm just hopeing I can keep the story fresh and interesting ^0^
I'm loving the story so far so please take your time so there is wonderful as this chapter four short chapters to work just as well I find it interesting.! But I was curious and wanted to ask why not just mutate your protagonist? Kind of like those new animes or for comics that's slowly mutate protagonist or something better stronger an unrecognizable sometimes but whatever is fine I'm loving how it's going so far keep up the good work
I'm loving the story so far👍 so please take your time so this story is wonderful as this chapter or write short chapters. That works just as well. 😎 I find it interesting.! 🤔But I was curious and wanted to ask why not just mutate your protagonist? Kind of like those new animes or for comics that's slowly mutate protagonist or something better stronger an unrecognizable sometimes but whatever is fine I'm loving how it's going so far keep up the good work😁👏👌!.
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Actually I did have some plans for something like that but still in the works on how I wanna go about it don't want it to be too soon kinda want to build up to it over the course of the story. Then theres the chance i might go a diffrent rought, But thank you for the idea I'm kinda going off a rough plan I had for a story in my head for awhile so any ideas to help spice up the story later for readers is great ^0^
There actually is a place called humanville
Also the word you're looking for is sapient (or whatever equivalent word there is for pony intelligence in this world) as sentient just means it has senses, sapient is more, can communicate has culture, logical processes
Read the first chapter just now, grammar has a lot, and I mean a lot, to be desired. But the story and setup are very entertaining. Will track.
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Oooh ok thank you I'll edit that mistake in chaper 2 thank you for letting me know also had no idea there is a place called humanville xD
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Yeah I'm not the best when it came to language arts had to use Grammerly just to make the chapters readable not very proud of being so bad at it
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Nice I'm looking forward to it 🙂👍
Did MC see which direction the CMCs ran off to?
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he did watch them run before turning his attention back on the timber wolves but he didn't fully learn about the town and which direction till after he met Zecora
I like where this is going. Very glad that Zecora has a way to fix his eye. Pinkie has an emergency supply of eye patches, right? Maybe Twilight should wear one until both of his gets fixed?
I wonder how much of the car is salvageable. Might be able to rig something with the battery and alternator to charge the phone. The radio and engine might be useful too, if given to Twilight to reverse engineer…
Though the engine might be too heavy especially if it absorbs magic like the rest of his stuff.