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I'm enjoying and hating this story please continue it
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I see... well thanks for enjoying and hating it
I don’t understand this temple thing. Wasn’t Sol looking for the Crystal Empire? Should have been a train, right? That’s how the Mane Six got there.![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
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Warning for others that havent read this far.
Chp 12. Fell into a cave and ported elsewhere.... (Insert starwars meme) Its a trap!
Quite the roller coaster of a story, curious how this shall continue to develop.
This is a very interesting story, I am definitely interested in seeing where this goes. I have definitely noticed some grammatical errors, like unnecessarily repeating words, or saying the same thing twice but in a different way in the same sentence. These errors seem to be happening less frequently, so that’s good. It has me wondering if English isn’t your first language. it doesn’t really matter I’m just curious. Like I said earlier though I enjoy the story and look forward to future updates.
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.I just lose track of my own brain more often than I like to admit due to lack of sleep (insomnia). Plus the person I had as an editor ghosted me so I've been on mah own haha. I think I've done a better job in other stories as this was and is the first one I ever uploaded here. I'm glad you like this story though and I look forward continuing it.
Unfortunately English is my first language
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so it’s no big deal
Everyone messes up sometimes hahah
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Thanks for your help mate! I'm slowly but surely getting to em!
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So how would the map look like?
Make sure you put the prober punctuation in from now on.
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Details I need to add on torch are he's bipedal like cinder and not that tall right now. Thank you for reading and editing this while doing so I will be going through and doing edits soon!