When Sunset confronts the Dazzlings on her own, she gets bullied by the three girls. Depressed and alone, she debates internally if the Rainbooms and Twilight truly are her friends until a certain blue haired girl comes to her rescue.
Only by studying the past can we win the present.
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Please tell me this isn't a one shot story, because this is pretty good so far
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Well originally it was but I could do a few more chapters if the demand is high enough
I would LOVE LOVE LOVE more of this!
nice work
Was the blue-haired person meant to be a surprise or did you not know that the Vinyl Scratch tag is DJ P0N-3?
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Surprise. Wanted to keep people guessing if I meant Sonata, Soarin, High Winds or Vinyl.
Lively lovely little short. Great chemistry between the two.
Would love to see a full story of this
nice
LOVE this, PLEASE show the final battle, and the rainbooms seeing Sunset transform, making them realize how much she has changed, and how much they fucked up!
Fantastic story, I do hope that you'll make one more that shows the final battle and Sunset being able to transform to show just how much she has changed as well as showing the Rainbooms just how much they had screwed up.
I LOVE this! Part of me wishes there was a little more, showing how the students reacted to Sunset helping defeat the sirens, but the ending was so cute!
It's not bad but if it had the part where the girls actually apologized for their actions then it could be better. I never felt like they were real friends considering everyone but sunset was invited into the band and they were always giving her a hard time over her past and saying no offense after you said something offensive doesn't make for good manners and you shouldn't be rude in front of others even your friends. And it ended up looking like they were only pretending to her friend by only asking into the band after twilight asked if sunset could take her spot.
My guy, I've said it once and I'll say it again....I absolutely love how you write Vinyl, and I love her portrayal in this story in particular. I don't personally see her as a hateful or mean person, nor one to be holding grudges, so it is awesome to see how friendly, cool, and kind, plus sympathetic, she is to Sunset.