Against better judgment, King Cosmos decides to enroll his two daughters Celestia and Luna into a school that is just for royalty! Just one problem: The school is across a portal into a world where animals (unicorns, ponies, pegasi, "winged unicorns", etc.) don't talk, use magic, or attend a royal school!!!
How will Sofia and her friends handle the new students? How will Celestia and Luna feel when they are thrown so far outside their comfort zone (and home)? Sure, they look different and act different and they will likely run into several practical issues... but what could possibly go wrong? (Flora, Fauna, and Merryweather can think of several things, all of which Cosmos ignored.)
Not sure if this is the first "Sofia the First" crossover or not (or if this categorizes as a crossover if the fic is AU) but there's no tag for it, so I guess it may be. This is probably a very niche genre, but I hope y'all enjoy the story! The idea hit me randomly one night as I wondered what it would be like if Celestia and Luna attended Sofia's school. Stay tuned to find out how I think things would go down!
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A question mark after Celestia and a full stop after asked.
whimpering ended up being inside the quotation marks.
Same thing here.
There shouldn't be a comma after the dash.
Should be a comma instead of the full stop.
Apart from those, this story was great!
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Thanks! I made all the fixes except the actions inside the quotation marks and replacing the full stop after Sofia speaks.
The reason the actions are inside the quotations is because I'm trying to imply that the action takes place while Luna is speaking. I did try putting it outside of the quotations, but somehow it didn't feel right.
As for the full stop, I don't understand how that's incorrect. Sofia has finished her thought completely and the speaker changes to Luna afterwards. Sofia doesn't talk again until after Luna remarks that Celestia is nice "most of the time" (reminiscing on the day before when Celestia "tricked" her into going to school).
I just remembered the rule now... you put a comma because it's not the end of the entire sentence, "Sofia said." is.... right. I'll fix that now 😂😅
I just came to the most stupid realization of my life… The chairs are not attached to the desks… I can see that clearly in my own cover image 🤦🏻♀️
Oh well, there could be other reasons like the desk behind her blocking the chair from moving or whatever dumb reason I come up with 😂 I still think the scene is funny, so it stays. In AU Royal prep, the seats/desks are bolted down (wouldn’t want any mishaps would we now involving chairs getting slewn all over the place 😏😉)