Against better judgment, King Cosmos decides to enroll his two daughters Celestia and Luna into a school that is just for royalty! Just one problem: The school is across a portal into a world where animals (unicorns, ponies, pegasi, "winged unicorns", etc.) don't talk, use magic, or attend a royal school!!!
How will Sofia and her friends handle the new students? How will Celestia and Luna feel when they are thrown so far outside their comfort zone (and home)? Sure, they look different and act different and they will likely run into several practical issues... but what could possibly go wrong? (Flora, Fauna, and Merryweather can think of several things, all of which Cosmos ignored.)
Not sure if this is the first "Sofia the First" crossover or not (or if this categorizes as a crossover if the fic is AU) but there's no tag for it, so I guess it may be. This is probably a very niche genre, but I hope y'all enjoy the story! The idea hit me randomly one night as I wondered what it would be like if Celestia and Luna attended Sofia's school. Stay tuned to find out how I think things would go down!
Disclaimer: The story will differ as much as possible from the series as I can without destroying the canon that makes the episodes or character development possible. If you disliked the show for any reason and are not sure about this story as a result, know that I too disliked certain parts of the show. That's why I fix what I can about the show in my story (except Sofia's insistence on calling Cedric "Ceedric". I'll resolve that later on, but much sooner than the show did.)
Characters under "other" tag: Starswirl the Bearded, Sofia, Amber (Sofia's step-sister), James (Sofia's step-brother), Queen Miranda (Sofia's mom), King Roland (Sofia's step-dad), Baileywick (Enchancia's castle steward), Cedric (Enchancia's royal sorcerer), and basically all of the other students/animals/commoners in the Sofia the First universe.
Characters under OC tag: Queen Ethereal and King Cosmos (Celestia+Luna's mom and dad respectively. I know there are several fandom iterations of their parents, including their names. The iterations in my story are entirely my own. Any similarities to another author's versions of these names are coincidental).
Characters subject to be added: Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra, Chrysalis, Tirek, and maybe Cadence.
On Hiatus until New Moon is complete!
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A question mark after Celestia and a full stop after asked.
whimpering ended up being inside the quotation marks.
Same thing here.
There shouldn't be a comma after the dash.
Should be a comma instead of the full stop.
Apart from those, this story was great!
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Thanks! I made all the fixes except the actions inside the quotation marks and replacing the full stop after Sofia speaks.
The reason the actions are inside the quotations is because I'm trying to imply that the action takes place while Luna is speaking. I did try putting it outside of the quotations, but somehow it didn't feel right.
As for the full stop, I don't understand how that's incorrect. Sofia has finished her thought completely and the speaker changes to Luna afterwards. Sofia doesn't talk again until after Luna remarks that Celestia is nice "most of the time" (reminiscing on the day before when Celestia "tricked" her into going to school).
I just remembered the rule now... you put a comma because it's not the end of the entire sentence, "Sofia said." is.... right. I'll fix that now 😂😅
I just came to the most stupid realization of my life… The chairs are not attached to the desks… I can see that clearly in my own cover image 🤦🏻♀️
Oh well, there could be other reasons like the desk behind her blocking the chair from moving or whatever dumb reason I come up with 😂 I still think the scene is funny, so it stays. In AU Royal prep, the seats/desks are bolted down (wouldn’t want any mishaps would we now involving chairs getting slewn all over the place 😏😉)
This is a very good chapter. I think that photo is very cute.
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Thank you so much! I think it's cute too! I've started falling love with Lunafics that feature NMM being either Luna's friend (after a time like in "The Wizard and the Lonely Princess") or outright being a fractured part of her (Like in "A Return to Form" and "When Two are One." Actually, the idea that Luna is going back and forth between shy and excessively bold is strongly inspired by a specific chapter in "When Two are One." Read it find out why 😊).
Stay tuned for more episodes/chapters!
Random question for everyone: Why is just about everything in the "similar" section tagged with this story rated teen and weird stuff??? Seriously? They are literally the farthest things possible from what my story is (A slice of life/adventure/with some drama story featuring Tia and Woona along with several other child characters and a royal elementary school)...
Similar like comparing apples to dolphins...
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Perhaps there's not many E rated crossovers.
This was great as usual! And that picture... 😍
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Maybe
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Thank you! And yeeees 🥰🥰🥰 (expect this to be a tradition! Cause we all love a good Woona fan art 🥰)
Do any Peter Pan characters appear in this story?
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Um, why would they? Did they appear in Sofia the First? I'll admit, I'm having to rewatch each episode while I write the chapters
Note: I have gone through and fixed everything I noticed, but feel free to let me know if I missed anything! Hope you enjoyed the chapter and please let me know if there's anything you don't like about the story.
(I know I only have 2 dislikes and 8 likes with several people favoriting this story, but I would like to know why someone wouldn't like the story and if it's something I could fix. I'm far from perfect at writing after all, so all constructive criticism is welcome!)
In the brackets it says "she" but then says "your sister". correction- her sister.
I didn't notice any other errors, and this was a great chapter! The saying is that you shouldn't forget old friends for new ones, but it works the other way around too.
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! Glad you’re enjoying the story! 
Good catch! And so glad the moral of the story caught on
I absolutely love the way you portray filly Luna! And of course, I love this story!
Me too...
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Really??? Hmmmmmm, I wonder who might have inspired my Chryssie portrayal
Are you continuing this?
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Yes! Next chapter is in the works. I hope to finish and post it today, but no promises 😅 I’m an expert procrastinator now 😅😅😅
Edit: so I didn’t quite finish it today, but very very close! I’ll definitely be posting it tomorrow 😊
Lol How does he put up with parents like that every time he's about to plan something?
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