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You probably need to crop this picture. I can see the cameltoe in it.

Final was close. Close to orgasm. Close to admitting her true desires. For a split second she felt herself ready to give everything to her new Mistress. But as she started to speak the words, something stopped her. The stubborn, moral center that had been with her for her entire life caused her to pause. A pause was all that was needed. This was wrong. Being intimate with her daughter, the complete lack of consent, and her life’s work turned into a slave market. She tested her bonds once more, knowing it was pointless, out of spite for her daughter’s ambitions. This was not her new Mistress, and she would not break. Starfruit gave an exasperated sigh in response.

This is what I like about these kinds of stories. The main person is not really so easily swayed. It takes a high level of reinforcement to put someone in a sub mindset and definitely if they spent most of their life as a Dom. Hitting them talking down to them and trying to gaslight them won't work. It will just throw fire on the base of what they are. And it's not simply, I'm going to overwhelm you with pleasure to make you submit. That's not a realistic way of breaking somebody.

I'm not a practitioner of BDSM in any sense, but I do know enough etiquette and possess enough reasoning to know that Starfruit has committed multiple cardinal sins of BDSM.

Drugging your sub without consent- Check!
Forcing your sub into a dynamic without consent- Check!
Changing a dynamic without consent (See Toy(Gear Shift))- Check!
Forgoing safewords- Big Check!
Betrayal of trust (Gear Shift)- Bigger Check!
Coercion and threats!- BIGGEST CHECK!

Not forgetting a complete lack of aftercare!

Thank goodness this is just a fetish story, and not an endorsement of proper BDSM. And, based off the author's other story, I'm fairly certain that's the point: it's sexy, but it's also something of a grim satire. And I can't help but respect that!

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