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Moonatik


A man with more ambition than he will ever have time.

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In the ancient past, when the world struggled to recover from the Reign of Discord, the lands that would become Equestria were in ruin. Tyrants, monsters, and warlords had risen, promising order in their petty domains but delivering brutality. One such domain was the Alicorn Supremacy, an oppressive regime whose subjects languished under a ruling class entirely of alicorns led by the self-proclaimed Suzerain Supreme Opaline Arcana.

War would soon come to the Alicorn Supremacy, as the neighbouring realm of Equestria under the leadership of the peacemaker Celestia and the warrior Luna resolved to end its tyrannical rule. The bloody conflict between the two realms raged for years, with the Equestrians making definite, costly progress. Yet with Equestrian victory imminent, Equestria's two leaders were divided on what to do with the defeated tyrant.

Over a thousand years later, Equestria was ruled solely by the younger sister, known then as Empress Nightmare Moon. Her forces stood triumphant and resistance to her rule was systematically crushed with an iron hoof. With victory over the scattered Celestials practically assured, Nightmare Moon learns that Opaline Arcana still lives, and may pose a threat to her burgeoning Empire. But as Nightmare Moon goes to correct her mistake, she finds herself facing not only her old foe but a truth impossible to accept.


Takes place in my New Lunar Millennium alternate universe. More information can be found here, but no prior knowledge of my AU is required to read this story.

Proofread and edited by Izzy Incraft and Ebonyglow.

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Comments ( 20 )

I knew I recognized that sword design. Very nice choice. Adding this one to the read list.

Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted Jul 6th, 2023

Why to people keep making someone like Luna a warrior when in the show she rarely fights and when she does she sucks at it?

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Ayy, I didn't think anyone would recognise as I changed the design to be easier to draw more distinct. Good catch!

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I do it so there's more of a contrast between her and Celestia. Celestia is a peacemaker, Luna becomes a warrior. Canon kinda sucks in this regard, but that's fine because that's what fanfiction exists for.

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They both are warriors in my book. For peacemakers we have alicorn inheritors, literal Princesses of Friendship and Love. You can't go more 'peacemaking' than that

But then they did.

For not knowing anything about Opaline, this is pretty close to how she is in G5 .

Why has nobody pointed out, that, "Sic Semper Tyrannis" was what John Wilkes Booth said after he shot Abraham Lincoln

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i skimmed the mlp wiki article does that count

There is one simple way, that Nightmare can prove, that she isn't like Opaline. Question is, if she will cease to use brutal methods, when they will no longer be absolutly last resorts needed from pragmatic reasons, or she will not. This is a thin line between a ruler and tyrant.
Also Opaline's rant miss some very important points in comparision between her and Luna/Nightmare. One, Nightmare isn't (I think) racist fuck, that hurt others for mere fact of being born in wrong body. Two, Nightmare, unlike Opaline, show care for others, her main reason to kill Opaline, was caring for her ponies and justice. Three, Nightmare isn't such an egocentrist as her, mere fact of Nightmare having doubts over Opaline's rant prove it.
Of course, I don't mean, that Nightmare is some goody, good ruler, she isn't. She is a subjugating imperialist, willing to torture others for sake of achieving own means (even if ending war faster is pretty important thing, saving a lot of lives in process, still will to commit such things speaks plenty). Undoubtly person, that can be called vile. But there are many spectrums of color between white and black and Nightmare is much, much more grey, than Opaline and it should be accounted.

Comment posted by BluDeuce007 deleted Jul 6th, 2023

Good story, Lunar empire likely won't half a centuries but hey, at least all magical threats will be dealt wuth before then.


The only negative thing is, there are too many OCs with too little time to fleshed out, all of them could be replaced with cannon characters that people actually care about and not jarring.

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Or the fact that Timothy McVeigh was wearing a T-Shirt with that very same phrase and an image of Abraham Lincoln on it on the day he carried out the Oklahoma City Bombing.

This is a somewhat interesting story and Nightmare has clearly fallen victim to the adage of He who fights monsters should take care not to become the monster. Since Nightmare did become the monster. I was mostly drawn to this by the G5 aspect since I do like the new show and have zero interest in Euestria at War which influenced your work strongly.

Wow, what a juicy treat this was. I totally did not see your author's note coming. Your characters felt authentic and the descriptions were vivid without being overwhelming - during the action scene and Cadance's perspective I almost started to read ahead to see what would happen while I was reading, which is always a good sign.

Can't believe this was so short; it told a whole story and established so much to think about.

Another amazing world-building story from one of my favourite AUs! I wonder what ultimate fate befalls Cadance and Shining after this?

I was wondering what happened to twilight ?

Excellently written fiction, accompanied by the equally impressive art the writer drew, best of both things. Thumbs up.

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