Summertime in Ponyville is in full swing. Foals are playing and the cicadas are chirping. Summer fun for everyone but two young souls will find something even more enjoyable than a relaxing afternoon sitting an apple tree.
Cover Image DOESN'T belong to me. All credit for this image goes to GalaxYSwiRL45 on Derpibooru. The link to their work is in the cover image.
Sequel: Roughly 88% done
My personal submission for the Thousand Words Contest
Audio Reading by StraighToThePointStudios Here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6NVM0qb_Fqw
Chapters (1)
Sequel
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Who knows... Depending on how things go with other things I'm working on it just might get one.
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Thank you for letting me know about this. This really made my day.
Man, what a cute and fun short story! Gotta appreciate our farm girl!
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But of course. I love Luna but Applejack holds a precious space in my heart.
This was amazing ! I'd definitely be happy if this was ongoing ! Keep it up!
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I actually decided to make a sequel to it. It's was nice to see so many people like it so I shall give the people what they want.
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Bet!, guess I will be waiting until then . Have fun writing it and I can't wait to see how it will turn out!
Just logged back in to see my little story under the Most Popular tab. Thank you everyone for reading so far I greatly appreciate it.
Very cute and straight forward.
aww but the ponies canonically have sunscreen!
the best combination of smells
well a strange place for that convo to go!
Oh, this is nice.
Oh no.
Yeah, a shipfic involving He Who Will Not Be Named was going to be a hard sell for me in the best of times. Tense inconsistency and all of the relationship buildup happening offscreen didn’t help. (Yes, you didn’t have a choice with the second part, but you also could’ve made the human literally anyone. Not anyone else, anyone. The whole point of Anon is that he is explicitly a nonentity through which the audience can project themselves.)
Sorry, but this was not the contest for HiE, certainly not for trying justify an Anon ship. Still, thank you for the entry.
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Appreciate the comment. Really made me think about deeper into how I should go about things in the future. Trying to fit things into 1000 words was quite a challenge for someone who has started to take up writing but it was fun giving it a shot. It was a great learning experience in the end.