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Soarin is a hunter of Deviants, strange creatures that defy logic and common sense. Crippled with immense debts he has no hopes of paying off and an entity inside him that keeps misbehaving every chance it gets, he takes a chance on a random ticket to the Midnight Train.
Everything gets worse from there.
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Inspired by Project Moon and the game Limbus Company.
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Damn, you really know how to sell someone being in their absolute lowest point. Or, in a horrible way, this isn't the lowest he could be.
Wonder what that blue envelope could be. Probably not eviction, but maybe a different job for later?
Oh, so that was what the letter was. Honestly, it probably can get worse than this. I also wonder what kind of 'loser' earns this much karma. The very open cannibalism of this chapter really shows the state of things. It's even freaking organized. It's very interesting. Also, loving the deviant's names.
Yeah, definitely not resurrecting some dead god or something like that. Perfectly normal job. Hope Soarin doesn't come to regret this decision.
That said, if this were a video-game, it sounds exciting. Let's see what these Traumas are about.
The Odyssey had a purpose
Whos radbury
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Do you mean, who is Radbury's MLP equivalent? Or do you mean who is the author Radbury?
If its question 1: its Autumn Blaze
If its question 2: its a famous sci-fi author named ray radbury
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Thank you. The first. Also I think its ray bradbury
I love the chaotic first mission, and considering no one was that badly injured, I would call it a success. Hinton being the one to try and reprimand the others due to Soarin's lack of confidence makes me think they'll need to help each other reign the others in.
Also, I'm always impressed by how you manage to create interesting and morbidly creative entities. And you describe them just enough for the reader to fill the blanks with even more horrific ideas.
Great job.
Andersen feels incredibly terrifying for some reason, his introduction being so different from the rest. Leap's stopping of Perault was impressive, and I like how the newcomers have interacted with the not-so-new. Here's hoping Hinton can help Soarin manage these three in the next mission.
Very interesting
Alright, despite the casualties, this fight went much better than the other at least in the teamwork department. I love that Salinger is the only one so far Soarin has an easy time arguing against, and he knows what he's doing. The more these passengers work together, the more successful they will be. At least if the deviant doesn't just overpower them.
Curious to see the consequences of 'dying' in this world, and I found the description of the different zones very interesting and draw a clear image of what's the situation in this world.
Love the new additions, Wilde took me a minute to realize who it was. Also, the one word descriptions of the others were hilarious. Glad to see Soarin be open to get help and to reflect on the way he treats the others. It's a difficult mission and task, but I'm sure he can do it.
And oh god, if the last two are even worse than the others, I can't wait for them to arrive.
This appears to be a well-written fic- but entering into it as someone who is not familiar with the non-pony half of the crossover, by this point I'm realizing that I'm lacking a lot of information needed to understand it. So I guess I'll just leave a drive-by compliment saying that it appears to be good for fans of both franchises, even if it's not accessible to those not familiar with Limbus Company prior to reading it.
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I mean, you don't need to understand all of it at this point, nor need any understanding of limbus company as it's inspired by not directly crossover with. All you need to know is Soarin fights monsters and gets a ticket to some opportunity he wants so he can clear his debt. Details of the world will unfold over time since I'm not gonna write a 10K chapter talking about every little detail on the onset, since that would be terribly boring.
However, you don't seem particularly invested, which is fine. Hope you find something you enjoy more.
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Oh... I guess it's a matter of personal taste in writing styles, then. I'm the sort of person who enjoys Estee's long-winded worldbuilding-based exposition weaved into her fics, for example. I do tend to not be personally fond of fics which introduce worldbuilding concepts without quickly explaining the worldbuilding basics, and I guess here I had assumed it was a matter of not knowing the crossover'ed franchise.
Sorry for any offense I may have caused with my mistake. If I had realized it was just a matter of personal preference for an otherwise good story, I wouldn't have commented.
Trauma time! And we got the first widely successful mission. Golding is getting a better grip of his emotions and he's found more agreeable comrades for missions. Of course, Poe had to balance things out. Can't wait to see what was that.
Just one more passenger to reveal, very exciting to see where this group goes.
Red coats and London. Very fitting. And excited for Scoot's story
Also I'm wondering who this is, I would assume Bloom but that don't really fit the name.
shouldn't it be 'your'?
“Hey, London, how’s the—” Pipsqueak started to say.
Then Scootaloo punched him in his stupid face.
Perfect. This meeting is promising to be quite fun.
I find it curious he calls her 'London'.
Well that was not who I was expecting as Verhoeven.
*remembers the first chapters with Golding*
Ohhhh, that's not gonna be good for those four.
I didn't expect a kind of adorable moment between Scoots and Pip but was quite welcomed among the madness. And speaking of, we're going right into it it seems. Excited to see what terrors come from it.
The fact that this isn't too far off from actual industrial times before any kind of regulations were made. Can't blame Scoots for wanting to be as far away from this as possible.
I'm happy to see London trust more on the group, though the further revelations of her past continue to be horrifying. I don't know what comes after maybe beating the trauma, but I do hope it's better for her.
Never thought parent's being dead would be the better option in a backstory but here we are.
It was a very interesting inner battle as Scoots works to some of the trauma her past has caused, and her manifest is the double edged sword one would expect.
Really looking forward to what comes next.