Another short story I put together. Apple Bloom finds a Death Note and begins to use it to punish those who deserve it. Just a quick story to spark my creativity, I have a larger story planned soon (one where Starlight Glimmer is still evil and is just waiting for the right time to get her revenge).
While in a different universe, Apple Bloom in this story is loosely based off the Apple Bloom I wrote about in "Cutie Mark Cleansers" and "The Black Apple". However, spoiler alert - this Apple Bloom realizes the error of her ways.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/199193/cutie-mark-cleansers
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/204565/the-black-apple
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Well I do like the positivity and I don't see many mistakes at all so good job. Pretty short, but you did mention such in the synopsis.
Was at least expecting a Ryuk like figure. So did the ponies AB killed come back to life?
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Thank you! Yes, the ponies that AB killed do come back to life when the spell is performed at the end to reverse the effects of the Death Note.
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Ah ok. Interesting.