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Wafflegodman


Writing, parkour, and music... this is Wafflegodman!

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I am... I really don't know. I just woke up, lying down in the middle of an ally in some kind of a city. I don't remember anything, my name, what I look like, and even how to walk! The only thing I remember is how to talk...and I... I guess I'm just scared.

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Comments ( 44 )

...lying down in the middle of an ally...

ally.

ally.

F*****G ALLY!

BTW: It's spelled "alley".

You have a good concept, but I'm not going to candy coat it. You're grammar is terrible. I'm not going to vote this either way because it isn't bad, it's jsut not good either. You'd have a nice story here could you get yourself an editor.

1341668

You're grammar is terrible...

Oh really? "You are grammar is terrible?" You couldn't possibly mean your, the possessive form.

it's jsut not...

:facehoof: That is all.

1341745 Ouch, well that's slightly embarrassing. That was a big mistake on my part. very silly error.

1341787 It happens to all of us at some point.:rainbowlaugh:

HiE fanfics are not cool. Also, I have the bad feeling that once I look at it and comment the mistakes, I'm going to beat the life out of the author's self esteem.

Hopefully it's just grammar and spelling, not Yet Another bad implementation of an idea.

Yes, I capitalised it. :twilightblush:

Editor, AHOY! :pinkiehappy:

"relrowl" Please explain why the cat made this noise. And it's Relrowl.
"eye's" Eyes.
"What's your name dear." Kinda flat.
'me " do' Umm.
"whit" That wasn't whitty. :pinkiehappy: Lol. It's white.
"eye's" Eyes. :ajbemused:
Also, references are funny if they fit. :pinkiesick:

Editor, AVAST! :pinkiehappy:

1341577 I'll change it. Thanks for informing me. :heart: 1341971 You are a very helpful person, if you're interested in becoming an editor for me just send me a message. By the way, this isn't going to be a HiE fic. :raritywink:

1341971 I must apologies for my terrible grammar. I was slightly... how should I put this... incapacitated when I wrote this, but fret not, for I shall continue this story in a more... um... sober state. :twilightblush:

1344481 No problem! And comparing your story's grammar to you your comment's grammar, I would say that you were a bit more than slightly incapacitated.:derpytongue2:

1341668 Working on it, I hope to get one soon.

1344545 Happens to the best of us. :pinkiesmile:
Also, since amnesia is a common start for HiE, I paniced hoping the story doesn't go to waste.
Can't wait to see what happened before she woke up! :pinkiehappy:

1346264 Thanks for the help, I'm looking for an editor, but until then I've been relying on my self... this is a problem since I like to do daily updates but...:ajsleepy: :applejackunsure:

Your worry was well placed since I got a lot of followers from my HiE fics, but I enjoy all fics, save for the more adult kind, and wanted to expand my audience. By the way! I've been talking to some of the other staff at Wafflegodman productions, and we've started to develop some sort story for Enigma's background, but it's rough. If you would like to contribute to the story, seeing as you comment often, feel free to send me a message of your Idea's, or put it in the comments! I promise that if you do, your idea will probably find it's way into the fic somehow. :twilightsmile:

Sorry for not putting a chapter up yesterday. I've been kept busy by family. :applejackconfused:

1357696 Your input is welcomed... actually you've helped me more then you'd think. I've been debating with my co-writer (who refuses to help me edit) whether, or not we should do weekly chapter updates, instead of the current daily updates. So, would you mind If this story only updates on the weekends?

1358929 I think i've been waiting months for some stories to update so once a week isn't that long of a wait

This fic has a romance tag and all three main characters are mares...
Does that imply what i think it implies? :rainbowderp:

1365116 :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: :raritywink:

But in all seriousness, this is about 'Living with the music' (Vinyl, and Octavia). I plan to make this quite a long fic, and the characters will develop certain... relationships. Whether or not it works out how you may or may not be thinking though, I shall not reveal!

DonĀ“t dare to stop now ok?^^

1482329 I won't. I just need to find time. I will tell you that chapter four is close to being done.

been a pretty long time, I thought this was dead. Anyways nice short chapter I'll stick around for some more. :raritywink:

1661076 I was convinced this was dead as well. In fact, I was about to close this whole... channel, page, thingy, I don't know... down, but I found a new wind to fly my sails under! I'm still in school though so chapter updates will be sporadic at best, but with all bad things, there are good things too. I've got a story board down, and I've figured out how I want the characters to act. I see great things on the horizon my friend. Great things indeed.

1661368 Yeah I see, school takes up a lot of time and personal things too. Just do what you think is the best way. :)

No no the next few weeks are going to be very interesting, at least for us probably not for them but only time will tell.

This probably should have been a blog post.

1684920 Yeah, but I did it late at night, to late now though. Sorry.

1707791 Honestly... the more fics I work on the better. It doesn't help shorten the time between updates, but it does keep my ideas fresh. By the way, it is great that you are still enjoying this fic.

dude. this story has alot of potential. I recommend that you keep writing it.

2161337 I will, I just have to catch up with all my other fics, especially Living With The Harmony... it is the Co-fic of this story.

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