Octavia was once just a loner and had no friends, but one day that all changed, well everything changed she makes a good friend, and learns what it means to have someone special in her life, but things might turn out for the worst in this heart warming, sad, and chilling tail of Octavia.
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This gonna be a great story!
Not bad mate keep it up!
I really want to know how this story ends!
Great! Just some polishing with the grammar and it'll be pretty much perfect!
There are a few spelling errors here and there, and when you say 'she seemed no longer on this planet, let alone in this world'
world and planet are kinda the same thing
I really like the story, but the grammar errors sorta take away from my ability to enjoy it more. I'm not very good at grammar myself, so when I see mistakes they normally very easy fixes. I suggest proof reading before posting, or finding a proof reader to help you out there. There is a great group of proof readers that will help you out.
Sorry if I sound a little mean, but I just see a lot of potential in this story. I don't want something easily fixable to take away from it. I can't wait to see the next chapter
huh? A vinyl and Octavia fic that isn't romance/shipping
i will put in Read Later b/c vinyl and octavia are best ponies
Hey sorry about the spelling, I'm really sorry.
Hey man I like. I just posted my story too so check it out. see you in first period :P
Haha alrighty
I'm glad to see how this has come out!
daw
I'm excited for this one.
OOOOOOO. This is great. I wait impatiently for your next chapter.
2 + 4 + 5.....dang no wonder math was actually so easy accouple years ago
yeah its a srupid idea
Great story anyway!
KICK THIER FLANKS, KICK THEIR FLANKS I SAY!!!
I Wub wub wub this story so much...
Freaking awesome man. You should let me proofread for you.
It was better than last time! Can't wait for next chapter.
Haha I ask you last time and you were all like yeah haha but I have two people who can help me proofread my story you and Ayojedi so its all good haha I'll like have you both proofread it.
hoo scootaloo 
very good
no DON'T DIE OCTAVIA
My emotions during that.
Nice chapter
and don't worry if you can't post one every week
Take your time when writing book.....time is alway requried when writing book no exceptions - personal experience
Poor Vinyl evrypony is picking on her
NICE
but This isn't going to become a shipping between the two, right?
Its just friends?
Yes just friends, I'm not into the whole shipping thing.
Lol Facehoofed
haha when are you going to write your next chapter, lazy haha just kidding.
Ahhh... yes. You show promise, I knew it wouldn't be a mistake taking this out from all recent stories.
Whodunnit?!
Hey Every brony (haha See what I did there) Sorry about being late on this one I was on vacation.
Me too.
aww one dis like
that ruined my day. It was going so well too, why dislike WHY!!!!
oh well I must turn my 
upside down!! 
I fear Lyra's mother...
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me too....
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I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Let's cower in fear together.
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Agreed
hehe
718528 Got room for a Gnome i dont take up much space
Ok so when I heard what colors the fillies were is kinda thougt it was Lyra and bon bon but didnt believe they could be bullies. My mind is blown. Either that or I'm insane. Dont know which one I am.