After a long night performing for a wedding in Canterlot, Cellist Octavia Philharmonica simply cannot wait to get home and relax, but what does Vinyl Scratch have as a surprise for her dear lover?
[Story inspired by artwork - http://alexiy777.deviantart.com/.]
Need to work on your grammar a little. Nothing too big, so you should be able to find them if you re-read the story a couple more times.
The cover art was made by alexiy777 on Deviantart: http://alexiy777.deviantart.com/art/Vinyl-Octavia-307513000
hmm... socks as a fetish item for ponies. I approve.
why so random????
i like it.
4 of 6 spikes from me.
SOCKS
HAHAHAHAHA socks rock!! also i need help. Im looking for a story that i lost track of, forget the name but its about how Celestia has been hearing rumors about her in the castle and she decides to take a vacation away for a wile. she goes to earth through an ancient portal and meets a human. I forget his name, but they stay together for a few days and didn't get to far because i lost it. if any pony knows what its called pleas tell me
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Thanks!
Cool story XD
Dusk approves
The story is okay, but you should try to re-read it and fix the grammar mistakes you have made. Reading it word for word backwards may make it easier for you to detect the errors.
like it i want more