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EroPony1000


I want to make clean, concise and elegant eroticism... about horses.

Comments ( 4 )

Oh, wow, this is excellent. I have to say the length of your stories usually leaves me unable to get invested in the scene before they're over, but every single word was used well here, from a very strong start. Still wish there was more, of course, but I'm real happy with what's here.

I like the absolutely indulgent morally disgusting acts combined with a cute lighthearted jokey tone, and the way that Anon is into this to even take advantage and try to sway Honey is lovely. <3

Good silly punchline at the end, too.

Thank you very much for writing and sharing!

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Wow! Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate the feedback and am so glad you enjoyed it. :twilightblush: Cheers! :twilightsmile:

I, I have no words.... how is it possible to be both disgusted and intreaged at the same time?

And both anthro and regular ponys in the same world! Mind blown! I've always thought that it had to be one or the other and have never considered the possibility of both together in the same setting until now. Very clever.

Sad to see the tainted Pattie go to an inocent bystander instead of the intended target, and it would have been fun if Honeymustard helped with the secret sauce, but I can see where that would have been difficult to contain within the strict 1,000 word limit.

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Thanks for commenting! I’m glad you like the sort of hybrid world idea, which I hope to use in more stories going forward. :twilightsmile: As for the final tainted patty… I guess if there is a moral to this story, it has something to do with snap decisions made out of spite and unforeseen consequences. When trying to hurt one person you may end up hurting another. :scootangel:

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