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EroPony1000
I want to make clean, concise and elegant eroticism... about horses.
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"Celestia stops by Luna’s room to speak with her, but when she sees her lounging on her bed, her flanks unprotected, she decides to sneak up from behind."
(Wiggles eybrows and rubs hands together enthusiasticaly) That's all I need to know.
That was hot! Well done! You get a thumbs up.
Might want to add a incest / orgasm denial warning though. Otherwise certain immature readers might get but hurt over it
>“Bite down, sister, and pull. I want to see it threaded between your breasts.”
No Anthro or Human tag?
10180722
No need for an anthro or human tag here, pretty sure we're talk'n bout Dem crotch bewbs 😉
10172402
what, hurt, really? impossible! the internet can't possibly have so many immature people!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Pretty good for a 1000 word story.
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Just as Luna’s moaning reached it’s peak Celestia stopped-- its.-Beginning was a bit too straightforward, but it became interesting by the end.
-Congratulations, you managed to combine trollestia and molestia into one pony!
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 80/100
Allure: 70/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 85/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 404/500
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Two Pump Dump
Just because it didn't take very long doesn't mean it wasn't fun! And you can always go again after a little breather. Your clopfic was the shortest by Fimfic's word count!