Spike Dates Everypony

Basically just a bunch of one shots. Which is the most voted on in comments I'll write a full story about. There's not gonna be a set timeline in each one shot so that's why it'll bounce from the library to the castle etc.

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Spike and Cherry Berry · 10th Apr 2023 · 1,507 words
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Spike and Cloudchaser · 19th Apr 2023 · 1,209 words
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HumanSVD

HumanSVD #1 · Apr 10th, 2023 · 1 · · Spike and Cherry Berry ·

Are the one shots connected or separate stories?

Comment posted by miceordogs deleted Apr 10th, 2023

TheKing2001

TheKing2001 #3 · Apr 10th, 2023 · · · Spike and Cherry Berry ·

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Separate. You pick the favorite chapter and comment it and if there's a lot of similar comments, just write a full story about the pair

TasermonsPartner

TasermonsPartner #4 · Apr 10th, 2023 · 1 · · Spike and Cherry Berry ·

It's got potential, but you need to work on your grammar some. For example, punctuation marks go inside the quotation marks, not outside. And when you're identifying the speaker after the quotation marks, you don't end with a period, but with a comma instead, and then you don't capitalize the sentence identifying the speaker. For example:

"This is beautiful." He muttered. Cherry smirked at him.

Would really be:
"This is beautiful," he muttered. Cherry smirked at him.

This is only for periods though. Exclamation points and question marks remain, though you still don't capitalize the next sentence when it identifies the speaker.