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Corejo


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Twilight’s hosting her yearly white elephant gift exchange, and Princess Luna couldn’t be more honored to attend.  The camaraderie of spending an evening with friends captures the spirit of Hearth’s Warming in such a way that even a silly yet simple game can mean so much more.  But while the fire of friendship burns strong, so too does the fire of curiosity:

What could possibly be in that box?


A very belated Secret Santa gift for Lopunny. I'm so sorry this took so long! Hope you like it!

Coverart by OofyColorful

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Absolutely beautiful work :heart:

Oh, this was absolutely delightful! Love the POV with Luna - most Luna-centric ones stay third person, understandably, since it can be rough to nail her inner monologue, but I think you did a great job! This was soft, sweet, and hit a lot of good, fluffy spots all around. Thank you again! <3

That was a really good story.

really cute and well written!!

A wonderful little story. And I really liked the first-person view. I've got a series in first-person and I find it fun, and somewhat easier to write in that voice. The use of some older words and phrasing really captured Luna well.

I suppose I should leave a comment, even though I preread this.

This was really good! I loved the way the characters played off each other, with the gift guessing being a good way for the characters to all interact. Luna was handled well, and you managed to get some interesting introspective bits in there.

Fantastic. I had a smile on my face through the entire story.

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