General Seaspray helps his best friend, Sky Beak. Part of the M/M Shipping Contest II
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Hell yeah
This was a fun story, I only realized Seasprey and Sky Beak were a couple until someone pointed out to me that they were seen living together in the season 8 premier. I like the shipping and thought it was interesting to see a bisexual couple being shown as being normal in their society with not recrimination between the former spouses, Keep it up dude.
This fic made me realize how desperately this site has needed Gay DILFY Hippogriff sex
i mean if you’re gonna sell me on a ship this is a great way to start!
ooh, very effective scene-setting
hehe, love this summary of Hippogriff politics
more like HippoDILF, am i right???
a line that could be straight out of pony Frasier, i love it
while normally an adultery element would cool my feelings on a romance, there is something about wrapping it all up in these problems of ruling class propriety that makes it go down easier
that the first descriptor to make this fic cross the threshold into lewdness was “the pair of plump balls”... that is just great!
hehe good justification!
mmm yes equine shafts…
oof this is rly good
always love this part
Seaspray’s motivations are established, he works hard to obtain them, and arrives at his desired goal. what a wonderful example of a storytelling arc!
hey, they have hooves, it’s still clop! excellent work with it, too.
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It came from watching Surf and/or Turf and thinking about how Terramar couldn't be the only 'griff whose family was divided between the land and the sea, and in a true fandom style extrapolating from there!
Seaspray's kinda biased when it comes to Sky Beak. Still, as the author, I'm stating that he's indeed handsome, and if you're sexually or romantically interested in middle-aged hippogriff stallions, he's very desirable. So yeah, total HippoDILF.
Oh yeah, "ruling class propriety" is a great way of phrasing it! While Hippogriffia is a family-friendly fantasy kingdom, keeping up the appearances has to be important for any member of the Royal Family.
I guess how adulterous the whole thing is depends a lot on whether you think Ocean Flow knows her husband's having an affair or not, and what she thinks about it... that could be a story by itself, I guess.
Pleased to hear the clop parts worked for you! I've got plans for a prequel, showing Sky Beak and Seaspray's first time, but who knows when I get that done.
Thank you for your comments, and thanks for the competition, too! I don't think I would have ever written this if not for it.
This was lovely! You did a great job focusing on them and their situation without the plot dragging, and the whole story had a sense of the regal to it. Nice work!
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Thank you! Glad that you enjoyed the story.
I would love a sequel to this!
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Well, I have a sequel (or more accurately, a prequel) planned, but can't promise anything about when it might be done...
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That would be great, and I'd love to read it once you finish it!
Thank you for reminding me about the existence of currycombs. Something for me to keep in mind for future writing.