Frozen Apples

It's winter at Sweet Apple Acres, with Hearthswarming day just around the corner, and yet, something's missing.

Written for GrangeDisplay for Jinglemas 2022

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Winter_Solstice #1 · Dec 27th, 2022 · 1 · ·

This was a BEAUTIFUL story...

I have a habit (which I'll keep from now on) of not reading the tags before starting a story, so I didn't know who the lost filly was. It made the tale all the better when I found out who she was, and why she was out in the snow.

You truly captured all the characters' personalities and emotions, as well as conveying the sense of loneliness, loss, and the environment of the bitter cold.

Well done!

GrangeDisplay

GrangeDisplay #2 · Dec 30th, 2022 · 1 · ·

I am absolutely blown away by this wonderful story! The ways that you described the atmosphere and expressed the characters' inner turmoil was brilliant and engaging. Thanks for writing this and happy holidays!