Months after Jason Wright's invasion of Equestria, the Cutie Map summons the Elements of Harmony, Spike, and Princess Celestia to Griffonstone, where they meet an unexpected individual: a second human.
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Don't be sorry it was a perfect link chapter nothing what's wrong with it. Now I wonder what is female friends are going to react when they see the Griffin kissing him I hope they are going to be jealousy;)
Well now they what they truly lost and what they could have had. All except rarity who still not willing to face her flaws. I wonder when the ponies are going to speak with Gregory and tell him everything because I don't think the other ponies did considering I think they want to forget everything about that place.
Yes! The chapter that I have been waiting for. But I'm sad because it was a short chapter only. Can't wait to see the reaction to that kiss though.
Ahh, I wanted Starlight as his future girlfriend, Gabby is good too, but the story put her as his friend, so I thought that was thar, oh well, I guess there is no herd mentality in this fic.
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Who says there isn't?
Missing an n at nothern, and place period at the end of again.
This has made my heart warm, a rare thing. I eagerly await the next chapter. This story is great.
God damn, she held out longer than me, that's for sure.
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Ooh! If the poly route is going to be taken, you should totally call it a “Pack” instead of a “Herd”, since they’re more of a predatory species!
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Pack, hoard, clutch, yeah.
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Pack, Clutch, maybe even Flock (Clutch and Flock ARE bird references, after all). Don’t know about Hoard, though. THAT one sounds like it’d be more of a Dragon thing, honestly. 🤔
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It does indeed.
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Although, that said, if he ends up with Starlight, Zecora, Gilda, Smolder, perhaps even the Mane 6, Celestia, Trixie, Eris (from the comic series, should she end up making an appearance after getting blasted from Dark Celestia from HER universe), and a few others... it COULD just be more viable to call it a “Harem”.
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I’d imagine her just crashing into the land one day, battered horribly, and barely alive, and above all, powerless... but she’d quickly be patched up by Gregory and his team, then slowly deal with a recovery period.
She’d eventually learn about her cousin’s fate, and though heartbroken, agrees to aid in stopping Jason if he threatens to attack anyone else. Might even have a heart of vengeance for it.
Rarity is gonna make a scene when they finally meet, I just know it, maybe Harmony should have used the Cutie Map to…. Send them all to a therapist?
Giving dual citizenship is weird. As in, it's not done except in cases where someone has legitimate claim to citizenship in more than one country such as by having parents from 2 different countries. And even then, many require that you pick one and renounce the other by age 23 or so. Citizenship comes with responsibilities that you can't give to more than one nation. The first nation you are a citizen of probably even prohibits you from becoming a citizen of another without also renouncing citizenship in the first.
You don't have to be a citizen to work in a country or even to permanently live there.
Well, at least the speech went better than I thought. When you got to the part about Starlight Glimmer I honestly thought the Mane Six were going to make a scene.
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Flock would likely be the griffon term
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I think it did, just not in a traditional sense
Oh Damn! Gregory X Gabby?! LET'S GOOOO!!!
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That character always seemed like she was destined to be overlooked when I first saw her. She was cute & adorable. Glad she's playing an a more integral role here.
Had Rarity on the damn floor! 🤣
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Eh, that would be going TOO far, imo.
3 or maybe 4 would be enough. But ALL of that?
No big deal, you posted a continuation of a great story, that’s enough for me
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Oh I agree. I highly doubt he’d realistically settle for dating ALL of them. I was mostly listing off a few potential candidates.
And well, among them are still various different species, which makes using a terminology of one specific species a bit exclusive of the others.
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A flock would likely be a group of griffons the way a crowd is a group of humans, but I think a harem of griffons with one male and multiple females would be a pride. Particularly since the business end is feline, traditionally lion.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
That really has to sting for Celestia, to hear former subjects renounce their citizenship.
This is so good. It's so God damn juicy. I love it. I won't be satisfied until we see Jason though. You hear me, author? I NEED MORE!!!!!
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Well I bet that last bit was a suprise.
Wonder how Gabbys sister is gonna react, it was implied in the series Gilda and Gabby are related. Just imagine Gilda saying “If you break her heart, I’ll break your spine!”
This is what I have been waiting for. Their reaction of learning the creature that has brought Griffonstone out of the slums into a new age of prosperity is the same species as the creature they shunned, seeing the side of humans that they never gave the first one a chance to show.
I just read the last 3 chapters soooo when is rarity gonna fuck all this up cuz she got at least 2 "I'm going to cause a fucking stupid scene" flags
Oof, now that is twisting the knife for the mane six. "Here's a human who didn't get tortured over years into becoming a monster, but one who was welcomed with friendship instead. This is a taste of what could have been..."
I'm worried how Jason feels about this. This is essentially what he had hoped and dreamed for. Will he be jealous or angry? Will he sink deeper into depression and despair? And how will he react when the presence of mane six is reported to him. After what happened between him and them (even when Discord's influence is taken into account) is there even any hope left to make amends, to salvage anything, or have too many lines been crossed, too many things done that cannot be undone.
My prediction: Jason will deeply resent Gregory, but want him safe instead of actually hating him; When the mane six approach, Jason will flip his shit on a scale worthy of Greek myth trying to protect Gregory from them.
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Almost guaranteed she's the only one of the group that just seems to be an ass forward and backwards even internal turmoil is still more hatred for other people than her self yikesss
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She does love her time spell.
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Starlight Glimmer deserved jail time ad rehabilitation
but not a massive beat down. The ponies are no better than humans or anyone else in my opinion.
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Please no herds.