Months after Jason Wright's invasion of Equestria, the Cutie Map summons the Elements of Harmony, Spike, and Princess Celestia to Griffonstone, where they meet an unexpected individual: a second human.
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Hmmm, interesting. Was expecting Gregory to throw them out of his house or demand that they leave Griffonstone at once for their appalling crimes, instead he just wants time to sort out his feelings. Reasonable to a fault I suppose, also I am happy to know that my suspicions that the ponies that entered Griffonstone, or at least one of them was a reporter trying to find information regarding the newest human in the world. And what is this, the changelings keeping watch are now pulling a code red, my guess is to mobilize a task force to either capture Gregory or to protect him against the elements.
Can't wait to see those ponies do when they get to the chancellor and I wonder how is other female friends are feeling when they saw Gabby kiss him
Rarity is so dead for not thinking first before talking. I hope karma gets her and the ponies who will do harm to Gregory
Oh shit. Something bout to go down.
*puts on helmet*
Welp if anyone needs me I’ll be in this trench waiting.
Glad to see Gregory is keeping a cool head about all this despite the worst news he's heard being confirmed right from the source itself. I wonder if he'll go on a journey to try and find Jason? Or if Celestia and Spike will go with him. Of everyone there they seem like the most likely to do so. And of course there's Rarity. Holy damn she's starting to annoy me with her constant nonchalant attitude and her desperation to pin blame on everyone but herself.
Looking forward to seeing what's next!
Rares is definition of "I'm not the problem! So & so is!"& I really hope a smack in the face (preferably from Spike of all creatures) is in order, especially now with her not learning to watch her mouth & giving up her & her friends connect with Gregory to some crooks. Somebody get her!
Her blatant racism is also bugging me. Give the mare a good wake up call!
Luna going to war with Gregory & the griffins probably wouldn't end well for the ponies if Jason were to pull a "protect your own" & sides with Gregory just off that alone & given the hate towards ponykind? They would be sitting ducks against nations who hate them. This is just a worse case scenario that has no way of happening....I hope
Gotta say Gregory continues to show that he is one hell of a leader & person with how he handled this meeting. A story is two sides & he let them get theirs out before he passed judgement which he was justified as hell calling a "disappointment" Finally, I'm glad we got to this meeting! It was worth!
And jesus Pinkie needs someone to talk to. I really ain't liking her depressed state. This is a dark story tho, so I get that. Someone get her the pony version of a suicide hotline if she's this down terribly!
Applejack's guilt....man I feel for her. Girl can hardly stomach what happened & is harder on herself than anyone else could be to her. Her empty "We Would" hurt a lot to hear.
Can't wait for the next update in this crazy but intriguing story! Loved every bit of it! Shit is getting realer than ever now!
Equestria better hope that the Elements uncover and stop these spies before they make a move on Gregory, because a pony attack on him with Equestria on the political outs with pretty much the rest of the world, and with the alliances he's made for the Griffons, it would start a conflict that would end badly for Equestria. Especially since, as some people have noted, Jason and the changelings would almost certainly jump in against them again too.
Rarity is not my favorite right now. She's thrown her accountability out the window and done something irredeemably stupid by talking to that news ponies. This friendship problem is going to drag on because of her.
It seems like everyone has learned their lesson and wants to atone except for rarity. Also Rarity had this blatant racism long before she went to Griffonstone as she assumed just because Jason burned down ponyville that all humans do it. Newsflash sweetheart, humans don’t do that shit anymore it was just Jason.
This isn’t going to end well, I’m scared Gregory’s friends will end up in the crossfire as well as him. Rarity being a closet racist… isn’t too crazy to me, maybe it was always under the surface but with her sorry state she’s not as good at hiding it. Alternatively it could be manifesting from jealousy seeing how well off the Dragons, Gryphons, and local ponies are compared to her home. I feel like it was implied Ponyville is a pariah town now, meaning even after rebuilding its golden age is long past. With nowhere to go she’s likely not to happy about the lack of future prospects in her community, when not to long ago it was on its way up.
I feel like the Twilight and company were still trying to offload a lot of blame on Discord (who yes is the ultimate villain), when they have admitted he just gave them a little nudge. It was explained repeatedly in the first story that anything more would have been too obvious and thus wouldn’t have worked. So he did more with less, with devastating results. I do appreciate Gregory being reasonable, but I think he might be more hesitant around them… maybe even ponies in general now. Alternatively they might be putting a little more blame on Discord in hopes of keeping the peace, to find the friendship problem. Not sure the Map/Harmony would understand or accept, “sorry we’re banned for life”, as an answer.
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More someone who only cares about looks. If you don't fall into that category well she won't like you. As for discord they don't know how far they might have gone because he opened the door to their biases. It wasn't 100% them and they can't know if they hadn't had that door opened would they have been as mean.
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You got any room for one more?
This third party is plotting something supremacy-like
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Sure come on in, oh and Here’s a complimentary helmet
*hands you a helmet*
And anyone else who wants to join don’t be afraid to ask to brace or survive the incoming storm.
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Maybe the friendship problem is all the poines who hate them. Or themselves.
I kinda want to see Jasin and the Changelings steal the Idol and cause the downfall of the Griffins again. Plus, with the Idol gone, the griffins start to turn on Gregory and he has to watch he whole new world fall apart before coming to the shocking realisation that it was only the subtle magic of the Idol that made everyone like him.
Thus giving us the other side of the coin of subtle magic which made everyone hate Jason and love Gregory.
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*Puts on helmet*
Thanks comrade! By the way does this trench have a restroom? Cause I had lunch on my way here...
FINALLY! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MEETING FOR FOREVER
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*Hops in, dressed as a Roman Legionary*
I’m with you two, it’s quite clear that excrement is about to strike the spinning rotors, in which case we will all be splattered.
*reacts to stares*
What? Okay, maybe not the right time period, but I brought my own helmet, and a shield to boot! There’s also food, anyone want bread?
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I beg to differ, given current events it’s quite clear that humans absolutely still do that shit. But not on principle at least.
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My point was that some ponies thought if one member of a species did something bad then they were all bad.
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Yes, just go to the right down there then left again and you arrived in the Lateines(military bathrooms)
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Ok thanks!
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As terrible of an idea as it is, it is most definitely intriguing, and honestly would fit in perfectly with the original story.
This has honestly become one of my favourite fics on here in a long while. Not only that, it's a sequel to an old favourite of mine. Bravo good sir/madam and make sure to keep up the fantastic work.
the three other ponies are changelings. aren't they.
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It's an not a normal behavior in the civilized times.
Not any intelligent creature can endure that, we have an approximate of how much ponies can endure in general, for example, Starlight, I just need a beating, the elements take a few days to break, Jason, a human lasted 3 years, if there is a race with the right to say that can take more shit are humans at least in this universe and fanfiction