Months after Jason Wright's invasion of Equestria, the Cutie Map summons the Elements of Harmony, Spike, and Princess Celestia to Griffonstone, where they meet an unexpected individual: a second human.
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Honestly I’m half expecting the ponies to hide the fact that they tortured another human
I wonder if she left because like spike she heard what jerks all of ponyville was to Jason. Though I can't wait for the girls to meet Gregory.
Is Gregory becoming a father figure for Gallus. I cannot wait till the ponies meet Gregory are they going to attack him at first mistaken for the emperor or are they going to treat him with suspicion or are they going to tell the Griffins that they shouldn't trust him. Griffinville I love it
My bet is Zecora got another dose of Pony racism before she fled. As for what’s gonna happen when our Equine hero’s arrive… honestly anything could happen. I’m definitely expecting Rarity to make a scene though.
Was hoping for the ponies and dragon's POV and reaction to Gregory when they finally meet with each other.
Borrowing money from another country is like borrowing money from the Mafia or a local street gang. Why do you thing the US lends insane amounts of money to other countries? Because the more they owe you, the tighter the grip you have on their short and curlies. Now you have a real dog leash that you can use to force that country to do what you want them to do.
"Hey Griffonia, listen, we don't like what Minotauria is doing so we're cutting trade. Guess what, your cutting trade too."
"We can't just cut trade with the Taurs, We get most of our steel from them, beside, we don't agree with your issues with them."
"Remember all that money you owe us? It would be a shame if we called that debt, wouldn't it? If we let the word out to the other countries that you're defaulting on us."
Again, there is a reason why rich countries give away billions like its candy.
Monk
"Anon had never known a bat pony to shy away from carnage. They were cuter than kittens, and much more bloodthirsty." -HeideKnight
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I rather like that they are holding off on that. That they are doing world building. When they finally do meet, it has more impact. Besides it gives our hero more of a chance to learn what kind of people the ponies are. Even if the Author lets him find out about it "Off Screen" Enough time has passed where a reasonable reader can assume people would have talked to him in scenes we haven't seen.
Monk
"not only was love blind but it must have some severe mental disorders too." -Recteik Shade
My guy is about to get the shock of his life.
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Wouldn't put it past them. Kinda also hoping for an arc where Gregory tries to take down Jason, or something akin to that.
I wouldn't be surprised if the reason Zecora left Ponyville/Equestria wasn't only because of the increase in anti-non-pony sentiments, and who knows if there had been attacks on her. (Probably verbal with maybe or maybe not "minor" amounts of physical attacks like being roughly shoved, to even having objects thrown at her).
But also because of her now strong feelings of disgust and anger at the Mane 6 once she found out what actually happened to Jason the whole time he was still around Ponyville. If her rather pissed-off quotes were any indication.
And I wonder: when Zecora suddenly finds herself "reuniting" with the girls and Princess Celestia, would she be the one that shocks Gregory to the core as she delivers bombshell after bombshell of what they did to Jason?
A part of me fears that Jason might flip out at hearing what Gregory is experiencing. Maybe not outwardly, but it's possible he might resent him for 'having it good'.
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Perhaps, but that doesn't really feel like the direction this story is going. Besides, even if the Mane Six falter in whether or not to tell, Celestia gives me the feeling that she's more than willing to do so, especially since she's dedicating herself to making things right.
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It is possible, but if you really think about it, the results weren't all due to the ponies. Much like Luna, Jason should have left Equestria. There are Tons of places and races both could have gone to. The Minotaur lands, The Zebra, Saddle Arabia, the Griffons, Diamond Dogs have to have a few nicer cities, AND there are tons of miscellaneous minor countries and City States. Yet both people chose to stay where they were not wanted and where they were not appreciated and both suffered for their narrow outlooks. Luna could have easily left the ingrates, found a city-state ruled by a tyrant and killed him. She would have been embraced by the people and then could have called for her thestrals. This would have given her everything she ever wanted. Even the ability to thumb her nose at her sister.
Jason, not so much. He couldn't have been a conquering hero, but he didn't have to be. He could have just gone into a new society and tried to fit in. Since most other races don't live by magic, he would have had a much easier time proving his worth.
Monk
"Cooties! Of course, colts like him had cooties! Then again, she probably already caught them by now. Oh well, can't get more cooties if you already have them, right? Grabbing the colt’s hoof, Anonymous pulled herself up." -IsakeiAnon
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I feel like if that happens they're all going to be on griffonias shit list.
finally! past the characterization and into plot dev proper!
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God I hope she does. 'Slam poetry' will take on a whole new meaning if Zecora decides to smack a bitch.
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Ive never laughed at a comment on this site so hard holy sHit
This is so good but man, you're killing me with the anticipation! I NEED to know what happens when they finally meet!
I have to imagine at some point we're gonna see a reaction from Jason. He has to be well aware of Gregory by now.
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I believe they will at first, but then they realize he'll find out one way or another, so better they confess their sins than someone else tell Gregory.
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That's what it seemed like. When Gregory asked her what she thinks a true friend is, she said "A true friend is not two-faced or cruel. Harmonious should be their rule.”
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I doubt they can keep the news within their borders considering once folks learn the princesses are there they are going to want to why equestria is close to outsiders. And they can't make excuses because truth has a way of coming out
These chapters are just absolutely addicting! I find myself hitting refresh ever few hours to see if a new chapter has dropped.
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Well, let's see. We have Starlight, Zecora, Gilda and anyone else who have soured relations with Mane 6, before or after the incident with Jason Wright happened. With the way things are set up its going to be a powder keg if things go south in a real damn hurry.