The next chapter pretty interesting and it seems like you're able to use the ball guy or nuts or whatever he's called in the more direct way in the last story he seemed kind of out of the place. But continue your work I highly enjoy it

So this chapter is cut out and reworked from the Nutsack Burger section from the first chapter? And the first chapter reads like a first draft or outline now.

Hey guys leave MPony1 alone and let him do his version of First Of The Month and Mpony1, Keep doing what you are doing

That was a hot chapter, I really like it.

The Sunset vs nutsack story in this chapter is very different from the one in the previous chapter. That one caught me by surprise, but then again this is just part 1, so I'm guessing you got something cooking up in part 2? although I do have a theory in my head on what's actually going on in this chapter. I'm not too confident in my theory but for now I'll just wait for the next chapter.

Wait, I just realized this is an ugly bastard scene.

I really love this chapter! Please let here be more chapters like this!

Don't want to sound rude but it's the next chapter/part 2 coming up soon?

nice