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Inb4
*jawdroped*
wow.... that was a new one for me
That was... vell, honestly? It was boring. It`s like you ripped off a song or something. Oh, wait, you did. Great job on taking something already boring and amping it up to eleven.
hory shet! O3O
HOREY SHEEEEETTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O3O
horey shet........
What the flying fuck did I just read.........
6889205 what were you expecting?
6896051 Well of course everyone's reaction was the same way.
I didn't think it'd be that extreme even with the warning label lol. I was kinda hoping at the very end of the last chapter for Fluttershy to turn around and kick Rainbow's ass or pull out a gun she had on her the entire time that she grabbed when her wife wasn't looking.
But then in the authors note it was like.. okay, I get it now. But still.
6896362
Wow, reading that comment made me realize the over the top context I completely ignored while writing this. Now I feel bad. Thanks for that.
6911692 In other words,
there was a missed opportunity to do something that would've worked better in my opinion. But the story is yours and you do whatever you want with it. Just to me, I saw the at the end of the perfect opportunity for Fluttershy to safe herself from getting killed because obviously Rainbow is so worked up on whatever the hell she is on, her sober conscious was long gone and had no idea what she was doing. I'd imagine Rainbow to be the violent drunk but not to that extent.
I did not mean to make you feel bad, that wasn't my intention to do that. My intent was to say what I thought could've been better if you did it that way because that would've shocked the readers because nobody would expect Fluttershy to have a gun and actually use it to defend herself.
Afterwards, I would've written a Epilogue or Sequel to this story explaining all the hell she had just seen and went through counseling to remove that part of her life entirely. Honestly, I'd be scarred for life too if I witnessed my best friend murder two people and knew that I'd be next and then shot and killed my best friend that basically wanted to kill me because I cheated on him/her. Though let's be real, I'd never. Cheating is wrong.
This is basically just my two cents on this.
I know it's based off an Eminem song, but I can only ever hear this
https://m.youtube.com/?#/watch?v=RL7lEe36MYs
This started good, then turned into nonsensical gore. You could take made this story SOOOO much better.