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Maonyman


You Lost The Game

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>barely any response
Huh. Well I thought it was an interesting prompt.

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I read the first chapter so far. It's good! Not what I usually read, but I do like your other works (I'd read Apple Hospitality since it was put on the paste). I'll try and get a chance to read the rest soon!

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post the whole thing, no matter the response.
Also it hit feature so... pony up.

Very adorable cover art pulled me in, this premise looks very interesting!

is this a YHAY story?

Very fun so far. Will be interesting to see what happens next!

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Also it hit feature so... pony up.

I saw that! Very surprising. But yes, I will continue posting.

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I don't know what that means.

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[Adult story embed hidden]

Its a pretty popular story that has had all sorts of spinoffs based around it's base concept.

That concept being that "Humans exist in Equestria but are only as intelligent as animals. And that a human from our world lands in Equestria and has to deal with being treated like an animal."

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Oh, no. Not at all. The humans are... roughly bronze age intelligence, I suppose. And a major plot point you'll see later is slowly introducing the humans to modern civilization and technology

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yoo that sounds so cool actually

Very cute interactions here~

Oh my gosh, Granite is such a cute character, her mannerisms are so funny~

Ok, the ending made me snort-laugh, well done!!

Sorry for how long this chapter is, couldn't really find a good place to split it up.

orp

"And how were you planning on handling the Cockatrices alone? How about the Chimera? (...) "Well.. yes, if you must know!" she bluffed

'Yes' is not an answer to 'how'. The flow of the dialogue seems a little off in this section. Other than that, though, this is a good starting chapter.

orp

This mare is suicidal, lol

"We have sent many of the villagers into this area, as they still provide insight or some knew knowledge.

"new"

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