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Maonyman


You Lost The Game

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Note: on hiatus at least until Apple Hospitality is finished

Anon and his trusty steed Applejack run a tight operation. Ever since the war, ponies have been used as beasts of burden, of labor, or just for "fun." Anon and Applejack find mistreated ponies and rescue them, giving them their freedom back. However, they may have bitten off more than they can chew with their latest rescue--an old friend of Applejack's who has been thoroughly, pitiably broken.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Well, you've got my attention.

Just a heads up, the first quarter or so is the middle and end of the first chapter. From when they arrive at the train to Anon returning to their room on the train.

She just kept on talking to the back of his head, "One of these days your 'act first, think later' deal is gonna land one or both of us in serious shit, and if either of us falls, this whole operation goes under. I need you to get around the humans, and y'all need me to get the trust of the ponies."

Hmm, foreshadowing?

"Focus, Anon," Applejack interrupted."

This “ shouldn’t be here.

Anyways nice start. I’m gonna read the next chapter before I say anything else.

The guy above me is still correct. About the first half of chapter 2 existing in chapter 1

Anyways. This is a good start to the story. We’ll just have to see where it goes from here. That poor pony needs help.

Oops. Fixed.

I've been meaning to continue this, but just been too damn busy irl. Sorry folks.

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