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Luminous Comet


Shipping girls since 2009!

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This story is a sequel to A Taste of Pink


The previous story is not required reading.

Sunset finally managed to confess her feelings to Pinkie. What awaits them now are the ups and downs one can find in any romantic relationship. And some unique to them.

Self-indulgent one-shots, with varying degrees of connection.

Credit for Cover Art belongs to omame0521/5mmumm5

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

aaaa great chapter like always!!! happy late nightmare night!! :D

"Have you seen my girlfriend?" was printed in bold, pink letters above the picture, continued below it in the same font: "Well now you have!" The phrase "SunPie 4ever" was scrawled underneath that in messy handwriting.

so true!!! hashtag sunpie

Pinkie set the mug down with a quiet thud. "Burning! I need milk." She quickly climbed over Sunset's lap and hurried to the fridge.

Some things never change. :ajsmug:

They were some of the first inside and quickly found their seats. Sometime between heading inside the building and getting to the seats, Pinkie had bought an armful of popcorn and small snacks, distributing them across both of their laps and into the cup holders as they sat down. Finally, she unravelled the string from her wrist and tied it around an armrest instead, letting the balloon bob in the air about the same height as their heads.

She's so gonna be in trouble once someone learns she brought that balloon. :ajbemused:

The sun was leaning towards the horizon when they left the theatre. Sunset walked a few steps ahead onto the sidewalk and stretched her arms over her head. Pinkie caught up after handing her balloon off to a child who had just come out of another movie with his parent.

At least she gave it to a child, so I guess I can let it slide. :ajsmug:

Pinkie waved it off. "Pffh, that's fine. You don't give gifts on first dates, silly!"

Then why did you do it is the question. :duck:

Sunset looked up to see Pinkie beaming at her, holding up her own hand. On her wrist was a similar band, orange and red, with Sunset's cutie mark printed on the heart. Sunset stared dumbfounded for a moment, before the smile overcame her again. She quickly put hers on and reached out for Pinkie's hand, looking at the wristbands next to one another on the table as she held it.

How nice of her. :twilightsmile:

They stopped in front of Pinkie's family home. Which window belonged to her room was plain to see from outside, bright curtains covering the inside and balloons tied to the windowsill, in stark contrast to the heavily subdued colours the house was painted it. They stood in front of the door and loosely held hands, standing in silence for a moment.

painted in.*

"I'm whipped aren't I?" she asked her reflection in the mirror when she quickly looked herself over in the bathroom. "No, you're right, I'm allowed to be happy. She won't mind if I'm a little messy, right? She never did before. ... Why am I talking into a mirror?"

before... Why*

"Oh, hush, let them enjoy their honeymoon phase," Rarity chided with a smile.

They're not married Rarity. :ajbemused:

Rarity quickly composed herself again, nervously fixing her hair as she sat up straight. "So sorry, Dashie. But to bring that thing out another time right at the end... that's cruelty to the audience, really."

And here I thought only Pinkie called her that. :applejackunsure:

"No, of course not! I'm just wondering." She cast her eyes down, nervously playing with the fork.

If you ask me this kinda wasn't necessary. :ajbemused:

Trixie cursed under her breath and slammed the ace down on the table. "You're distracting Trixie with useless concerns!"

Your the one who started the conversation. :duck:

Sunset tried to have an eye out for any of the students' reactions, but none of them were whispering or gossiping more than usual. She still had a hard time not thinking the few who were were talking about them , but what were the chances of that, really? After all, Pinkie Pie being overly affectionate to her friends wasn't anything new.

who were talking about them,*

Of course the weirdos would stick together.

Interesting fact, this line plays a important role in the tv show Owl House. Except it's "Us weirdos have to stick together!" :ajsmug:

"Yeah, no worries." She girl smiled at her before chatting with her friend again. Sunset tried to snap up a few words, but they had pivoted to discussing a movie now.

girl smiled? :applejackconfused:

After they had finished and set their instruments back, Sunset was one of the first to leave. Pinkie stuffed the drumsticks into her backpack and quickly followed her out. She caught up in the hallway and wanted to reach for her arm, but something stopped her, so she just lightly took her hand instead. Sunset's fingers tightened around hers immediately.

How did she manage that? Stuffing her drumset into her backpack!?!? :pinkiegasp:

"Have you seen my girlfriend?" was printed in bold, pink letters above the picture, continued below it in the same font: "Well now you have!" The phrase "SunPie 4ever" was scrawled underneath that in messy handwriting.

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girl smiled?

The girl smiled. My mistake, good catch.

How did she manage that? Stuffing her drumset into her backpack!?!?

Drumsticks, as in the handheld sticks to play the drums with.

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Np and I thought it was the drums itself, not the sticks.

Pinkie shrugged, sinking against Sunset's shoulder again. "I had leftovers."

Of course. :facehoof:

Rarity didn't just give it her all on the costumes, she had also spent several days with Sweetie Belle - and volunteers from both of their friend groups - decorating their house. As so often, their parents would be out of town, leaving most of the responsibility with Rarity.

I feel sorry for them at times they have to deal with that a lot. They're parents being away that is. :fluttershysad:

Diamond and Silver shrieked and both stumbled to run out of the house, but their screams collapsed into laughter once they got back to fresh air. "Okay, that was pretty good," Diamond admitted as they casually walked back to the street.

Good one girls. :twilightsmile:

Not sure when the next chapter will be out but I'll be looking forward to it. :scootangel:

"You just said you weren't surprised." Pinkie narrowed her eyes at her. "What's the lie? Why are you lying to me?"

Some things never change. :ajsmug:

"And I'm already annoying as is!" Pinkie added cheerfully.

Mhm... :ajbemused:

"Ugh, disgusting!" Sunset laughed, shoving her face away, making her collapse in a pile of giggles. "Okay, you pick the next one, I'm gonna read my donations."

She gets donations from this? :applejackconfused:

"Maybe you'll find out," Sunset said quietly, closing her eyes and slowly caressing her back.

YES, DOUBLE PINKIE IN EQUESTRIA

"Uh-huh."
"Because you're gay."

The way that made me laugh so much💀, Trixie is so iconic

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