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Supernova08


Amateur writer, will occasionally post a story

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Sunset and Pinkie have a fantastic idea, inviting the Dazzlings to a sleepover! Just one problem, neither the Rainbooms or the Dazzling want to have one.

A story request by JBlaser

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

That was a good story.

This was a really fun read. Definitely worth a favorite. Love the interactions the HuMane Seven had with the Dazzlings. Quite well written, all around. It's a shame so few people want to write sleepover stories these days, as they can lead to a lot of fun and adorable moments.

You forget Fluttershy? You get none of my sympathy!

Just kidding. This was a really fun read. I loved it through and through. But it does make me wonder where Fluttershy has been all this time. Did she just get distracted helping out animals in a nearby zoo, and as such didn't show up for the slumber party?

It would make for a pretty fun little follow-up story, showing Fluttershy's adventures while the rest of the HuMane Seven were dealing with the Dazzlings.

Also, I wonder if Pinkie passing out after saying "Today was so much fun" was a nod to her also passing out after saying "I've never been so excited" in the MLP episode 'Do Princesses Dream of Electric Sheep'. If it is the case, that was a neat little reference you put in. Pinkie really does fall asleep quickly, without warning. Funny to think that Sonata has such a similar personality to Pinkie.

Dan

Pinkie should have decorated. I'm sure Sonata would have loved some big balloons to play with.
All bouncy, bubbly girls love balloons.
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Wow, what an adorable story. :pinkiehappy:

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The story is destroyed... Destroyed the story with one line... Could have ended the story on better terms but since there is no next chapter to this, I guess the sirens are still evil, they betrayed them and then kill everyone right? Because they are still evil and traitors.

“Don’t think this means were friends or anything,” Adagio remarked. She paused for a bit before continuing.

Man this whole entire sleepover was a whole mistake from the start Sunset! They didn't turn good and they didn't become their friends, nothing but traitorous scumbags in the end. Should have just killed them off earlier on. Drown them, poison them, shoot them in the head with a pistol! Those three should have just get run over by someone drunk driving. That line made me hate the Dazzlings in this!

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Um..no, that one line doesn't destroy the story. All that means is Adagio still doesn't trust the HuMane Seven, which makes total sense given what happened in Rainbow Rocks. The only reason she agreed to come over to the sleepover at all was because 1) Sonata insisted that they should do it and 2) the HuMane Seven agreed to not bother them again after that. Adagio isn't a character that will change after a single event-rather it would take more time for her to develop further as a character, and for her to actually come to terms with the HuMane Seven as well. I love what has been written here-it was quite charming, and does show that, despite her rather harsh exterior persona that she gives, Adagio does have a more loving personality deep down, one that she exhibits to her close friends Sonata and Aria. Not only that, but I could definitely see Sonata and Aria wanting to do this again in the future. So it could make for more stories like this one.
So please, enough with the hate. And don't tag me or anyone else here. Just because you wanted to make a point doesn't give you the excuse to call everyone else in the chain here to see it.

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